Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I had one.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes it is pretty popular almost everyone is using it as a transportation going to school to work or anywhere nearby

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 72.0

Sugestão: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too brief to demonstrate your speaking ability. Add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it. Use a linking word such as “especially” or “because” to develop your answer naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I had one when I was about eight years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood, especially on weekends, because it was a fun way to spend time outdoors.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: You answer the question directly, but there are several grammatical and word-choice problems. Use “they are” instead of “it is” because “bikes” is plural, and say “a means of transportation” or “for transportation” rather than “as a transportation.” Break the run-on sentence into two or three sentences and add a specific reason or example to make your response clearer and more effective.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for transportation, especially when they are going to school, work, or nearby places. They are convenient, inexpensive, and better for the environment than cars.

Gramática

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes it is pretty popular almost everyone is using it as a transportation going to school to work or anywhere nearby

✓ Yes, they are pretty popular. Almost everyone uses them for transportation to school, work, or nearby places.

The noun bikes is plural, so it must be replaced by the plural pronoun they when it is the subject and them when it is the object. The singular pronoun it does not agree with bikes.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes it is pretty popular almost everyone is using it as a transportation going to school to work or anywhere nearby

✓ Yes, they are pretty popular. Almost everyone uses them for transportation to school, work, or nearby places.

The subject bikes is plural, so the correct form is they are, not it is. Subjects and verbs must agree in number.

6: Present tense issue

× Yes it is pretty popular almost everyone is using it as a transportation going to school to work or anywhere nearby

✓ Yes, they are pretty popular. Almost everyone uses them for transportation to school, work, or nearby places.

The question asks about a general fact, so the simple present uses is more appropriate than the present continuous is using. Use the simple present for habits and usual situations.

22: Article errors

× Yes it is pretty popular almost everyone is using it as a transportation going to school to work or anywhere nearby

✓ Yes, they are pretty popular. Almost everyone uses them for transportation to school, work, or nearby places.

Transportation is generally an uncountable noun, so it should not be preceded by the indefinite article a. Say for transportation, not as a transportation.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes it is pretty popular almost everyone is using it as a transportation going to school to work or anywhere nearby

✓ Yes, they are pretty popular. Almost everyone uses them for transportation to school, work, or nearby places.

The original answer joins several complete ideas without punctuation, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the ideas with a period and use clearer parallel expressions such as to school, work, or nearby places.

Vocabulário

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Pretty— Attractive; Quite; Beautify
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