Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and use a clear basic structure: state that you had a bike, then explain who bought it and how you used it. Correct the grammar and phrasing: use “I was lucky to have,” “My father bought it for me,” and “I rode it to school.” Avoid unclear expressions such as “It is,” “Agreed to offer me,” and “I like the BA bike very.” Add one specific detail, such as the bike’s color or how you felt about it.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a purple bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, so I felt very lucky. I often rode it to school and around my neighborhood. I really loved that bike because it was my first one.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer using the plural form “bikes are” and support it with a clear reason or example. Use linking words such as “especially,” “for example,” and “because.” Correct the expressions “some share bikes” to “many bike-sharing services,” “take it” to “use them,” and “after a subway or bus” to “after taking the subway or a bus.” Replace “It is a convenience store” with “They are convenient for everyone.”

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Beijing. Many people use shared bikes after taking the subway or a bus to complete the last part of their journey. They are convenient and affordable, and people can easily pick them up and leave them near their destination.

× It is. Agreed to offer me to take to go to school.

✓ It allowed me to go to school.

The sentence contains an unnecessary full stop and uses agreed incorrectly. Because the question asks about a childhood experience, allowed is the appropriate past-tense verb. After allow, use the pattern allow someone to do something, not offer me to take to go.

× I like the BA bike very.

✓ I liked the bike very much.

Liked is more suitable because you are talking about a bike you had as a child. Very cannot be placed directly after the verb in this meaning. Use very much after the object or at the end of the sentence. BA bike also appears to be an unintended repetition or typing error.

× Yes, bike is very popular in our country, especially in Beijing.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country, especially in Beijing.

Bikes refers to bicycles in general, so it should be plural. The plural subject bikes also requires the plural verb are. When speaking generally about a countable item, use the plural form rather than singular bike without an article.

× Now we have some share bikes, we can take it after a subway or bus.

✓ Now we have some shared bikes, and we can take them after getting off the subway or a bus.

The sentence joins two independent clauses with only a comma, so use and or separate them into two sentences. Some share bikes requires the plural pronoun them, not it. Shared is the appropriate adjective for bikes that people use temporarily. After getting off the subway or a bus expresses the intended meaning more clearly.

× It is a a convenience store for everyone to use.

✓ They are convenient for everyone to use.

A bike is not a convenience store, so convenient is the appropriate adjective. The repeated article a a is incorrect. Because they refers to the plural shared bikes in the previous sentence, use the plural verb are. The phrase convenient for everyone to use is a natural sentence structure.