Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating or restarting phrases. Correct the grammar: say “when I was a child,” “it boosted my energy,” and “I had an accident.” Explain the accident clearly, and use a linking word such as “however” to connect the contrasting ideas. Keep the answer to two or three complete sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it because it was fast and gave me a lot of energy. However, I eventually stopped riding because I had an accident.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then provide one clear reason. Avoid repeating “because” and “warm,” and correct the grammar by saying “most people have cars,” “you can sit in a car,” and “you do not have to pedal.” Use more precise vocabulary, such as “convenient,” “comfortable,” and “weather conditions,” to explain why cars are preferred.

Exemplo: Not really. Most people in my country prefer cars because they are more comfortable and convenient, especially in bad weather. You can simply sit inside and drive instead of having to pedal, so bikes are mainly used for exercise or short journeys.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The verb be must be in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. The correct past-tense form for I is was, not were.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I were when I was repeats the same clause and makes the sentence structurally incorrect. State the time clause only once.

× I used to love riding a bicycle because it is so fast and it boots boost my energy.

✓ I used to love riding a bicycle because it was so fast and boosted my energy.

The answer describes your experience in the past, so the past forms was and boosted are appropriate. Keep the verb tenses consistent when discussing a past period.

× It boots boost my energy.

✓ It boosted my energy.

The subject it is third-person singular. In the present tense, the verb would be boosts, but because the answer describes the past, the correct form is boosted.

× Why I start because it's I had an accident.

✓ That is why I started riding: I had an accident.

The verb start should be in the past tense, started, because the speaker is describing a past event. The original words are also incomplete, so adding That is why creates a complete sentence.

× Everyone in my country has have a car.

✓ Everyone in my country has a car.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so it takes the singular verb has. Do not use both has and have together.

× You can just sit it and drive it.

✓ You can just sit in it and drive it.

The preposition in is required after sit when referring to sitting inside a car. The correct phrase is sit in it, not sit it.