Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Of course yes, I learn cycling when I was young and my parents start started teaching me around primary school so I have a bike around primary 6, primary three story.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Of course I think cycling are popular in my country because like my living place drunken old drunken old also have some cycling Rd. LED people to ride and some many places also like you know nor charting also have some.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 38.0Sugestão: 回答基本切题,但存在明显的时态、搭配和表达重复问题。应使用过去时:把“learn”改为“learned”,把“start started”改为“started”,把“have”改为“had”。“learn cycling”应改为“learn to ride a bike”,“primary 6, primary three story”表达不清,建议直接说明具体年龄或年级。可以先直接回答“是的”,再补充父母教你骑车以及你何时拥有自己的自行车。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was in primary school, and my parents taught me in our neighborhood. I got my own bike when I was about nine years old, and I used it to ride around with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: 回答观点明确,但语法错误和语音识别造成的重复较多,影响理解。“cycling are”应改为“cycling is”或“bikes are”,“many places”前不需要“some”。应避免“like”“you know”等口语填充词,并清楚说明你所在地区以及其他地方的具体情况。建议使用“because”引出原因,再用一个具体例子支持观点,例如自行车道多、很多人骑车通勤或锻炼。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or short trips, and some cities have dedicated bike lanes. For example, in my neighborhood, there are several cycling paths, so it is common to see people riding bikes in the evening.
× Of course yes, I learn cycling when I was young and my parents start started teaching me around primary school so I have a bike around primary 6, primary three story.
✓ Of course. I learned to cycle when I was young, and my parents started teaching me in primary school, so I had a bike around Primary 6, or perhaps Primary 3.
问题是在描述童年经历,整体时间是过去时,因此要用过去式:learn 改为 learned,start 改为 started,have 改为 had。注意不要同时使用 start 和 started;只保留 started。回答过去经历时,可以先确定时间,再统一使用过去时。
× Of course I think cycling are popular in my country because like my living place drunken old drunken old also have some cycling Rd. LED people to ride and some many places also like you know nor charting also have some.
✓ Of course, I think cycling is popular in my country because my local area also has some cycling roads that allow people to ride, and many other places have them too.
Cycling 在这里表示一种活动或运动,是不可数名词,通常看作单数,所以应使用 is,而不是 are。my local area 是第三人称单数,谓语应使用 has,而不是 have;many other places 是复数,所以使用 have。表达地点和设施时,要特别注意主语是单数还是复数,并使谓语动词保持一致。