Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly, then add one or two specific details. Use natural expressions such as “a pink bike” instead of “a bike in pink color,” “my parents” instead of “my parent,” and “on my sixth birthday” instead of “on my 6 years old birthday.” Correct the verb forms in “it often reminds me” and “the time my parents spent with me.” Avoid repeating “I had a bike when I was a child” and keep the answer to three or four connected sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small pink bike that my parents gave me for my sixth birthday. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, and it still reminds me of the happy times I spent with my parents.

Sugestão: Give a clear overall answer and organize the comparison between rural and urban areas more logically. Use plural forms and natural collocations, such as “bikes are,” “go to school by bike,” and “take the bus.” Avoid unnecessary repetition and incomplete phrasing, especially “And I most of the time even my my own son.” Use linking words such as “However” or “In contrast,” and support your opinion with a complete personal example about your son.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. In rural areas, many children ride their bikes to school, whereas children in cities often take the bus because of heavy traffic. However, people still cycle around their neighborhoods in their free time, and my son often enjoys doing that with his friends.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and the one that I had is in pink color which is the gift I received from my parent on my 6 years old birthday.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and the one I had is pink. It was a gift I received from my parents on my sixth birthday.

Parent should be plural because the speaker refers to both parents. Use parents instead of parent. Also, pink is the natural adjective for the color, and sixth birthday is the correct expression for a birthday at age six.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and the one that I had is in pink color which is the gift I received from my parent on my 6 years old birthday.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and the one I had is pink. It was a gift I received from my parents on my sixth birthday.

In pink color is unnatural in this sentence. Use the adjective pink directly after the linking verb is: the bike is pink. This is more natural and grammatically appropriate.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and the one that I had is in pink color which is the gift I received from my parent on my 6 years old birthday.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and the one I had is pink. It was a gift I received from my parents on my sixth birthday.

The expression 6 years old birthday has an incorrect form. When referring to the birthday reached at a particular age, use an ordinal number: my sixth birthday. If describing a noun with an age phrase, the form would be six-year-old, with hyphens.

× I really love this because it's often remind me of the time that my parents spent on.

✓ I really love it because it often reminds me of the time my parents spent with me.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the verb in the present tense must be reminds, not remind. The phrase it is often remind is also incorrect; use it often reminds.

× I really love this because it's often remind me of the time that my parents spent on.

✓ I really love it because it often reminds me of the time my parents spent with me.

Spent on normally needs a specific object, such as money spent on a bike. When referring to time shared with a person, use spent with me. The relative pronoun that can be omitted here because the sentence is already clear.

× Yes, bike is quite popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.

The answer discusses bikes in general, so the plural noun bikes is appropriate. The plural subject also requires the plural verb are.

× Most of the time the children, they will go to school by bike every day.

✓ Most of the time, children go to school by bike every day.

The noun phrase the children and the pronoun they repeat the subject unnecessarily. Use one subject only. Children go is the clearer structure.

× Most of the time the children, they will go to school by bike every day.

✓ Most of the time, children go to school by bike every day.

The sentence describes a regular habit, so use the simple present go rather than the future form will go. The simple present is used for repeated or usual actions.

× If you're living in a rural area and if you're living in the city, they usually take bus to school.

✓ If you live in a rural area, you usually go to school by bike, whereas if you live in the city, you usually take the bus to school.

Use the article the before bus when referring to the usual public transportation service: take the bus. Also, a rural area requires the indefinite article a because it refers to one nonspecific area.

× If you're living in a rural area and if you're living in the city, they usually take bus to school.

✓ If you live in a rural area, you usually go to school by bike, whereas if you live in the city, you usually take the bus to school.

This sentence describes general situations, not temporary activities, so use the simple present live instead of the present continuous are living. The simple present is more suitable for general facts and routines.

× But in their free time, they normally cycling around the neighborhood, which is very fun.

✓ But in their free time, they normally cycle around the neighborhood, which is very fun.

After the adverb normally, use the simple present verb cycle to describe a regular activity. The -ing form cycling needs a form of be, as in they are cycling, but that would describe an activity happening at a particular time.

× And I most of the time even my my own son.

✓ My own son does this most of the time, too.

The original sentence does not contain a complete verb phrase, so it is a sentence fragment. Add the verb does to express the action. Too is placed at the end to mean also.