Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is direct and gives clear reasons, but there are a few grammar and naturalness problems. Use the past tense “never learned” instead of “never learn,” and replace the unnatural phrase “nobody around me was really all over bikes” with “nobody around me was particularly interested in cycling.” The final part repeats the idea that you were not interested, so express it more concisely. You could also add one specific detail, such as how you usually traveled as a child.

Exemplo: No, I never had a bike as a child. I never learned to ride one because I was not particularly interested in cycling, and nobody in my family rode bikes either. We usually traveled by car, so I never really felt the need to learn.

Sugestão: You answer the question directly and provide an explanation, but the response is somewhat repetitive because “when I’m out” and “on the road” are repeated. Avoid fillers such as “like” and replace the indirect phrase “helps me come to the conclusion that maybe” with a more confident expression, such as “This suggests that.” Also, a bike lane alone does not necessarily prove that many people cycle, so give a more specific example, such as seeing cyclists during commuting hours or mentioning bicycles as a common form of transport in certain areas.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in Indonesia, especially in large cities. Many roads have designated bike lanes, and I often see people cycling there during the morning and evening rush hours. They use bikes both for exercise and for commuting, although motorcycles and cars are still more common.

× Actually I never learn to ride a bike because I just never felt interested in it and nobody around me was really all over bikes, so I just didn't feel the need to.

✓ Actually, I never learned to ride a bike because I was never interested in it, and nobody around me was really interested in bikes, so I just didn't feel the need to.

The verb learn describes a past experience because the student is talking about childhood. Therefore, it must be in the simple past tense: learned, not learn. The phrase was really all over bikes is unclear in this context; was really interested in bikes is the appropriate expression for showing a lack of interest.