Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and separate the ideas into two sentences to avoid a comma splice. Add one specific detail, such as who you rode with or where you went. The phrase “used to ride” is appropriate for a repeated past activity, and a linking word such as “usually” or “especially” can make the response smoother.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends, especially after school.

Sugestão: State your main idea clearly, then give two or three well-organized reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and fillers such as “like,” “joy joy,” and “sometimes”; the phrase “for work and missing” is unclear and should be replaced with a precise expression such as “for commuting.” Use linking words such as “for example,” “in addition,” or “although,” and keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to travel around their neighborhoods or commute to work because they are cheap and convenient. Others ride them for exercise or leisure, especially in parks and small towns.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, we used to ride around the neighborhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around the neighborhood.

The original sentence joins two independent clauses with only a comma, which creates a comma splice. Use a full stop or a conjunction to separate the clauses. The pronoun it is also added to clearly refer to the bike.

× People usually ride a bicycle when travelling around the neighborhood, sometimes even for work and missing sometimes just having like joy joy right around like the neighborhood or the town or some you even use them for travel.

✓ People usually ride bicycles around the neighborhood. Sometimes, they even use them to travel to work or simply to have fun around the neighborhood or town.

The original sentence contains several incomplete and poorly connected phrases, such as missing sometimes just having like joy joy and or some you even use them. Organize the ideas into complete sentences and use clear subjects and verbs. Use to travel rather than for travel after use them to express purpose more naturally.