Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly in the past tense: say “Yes, I had a bicycle.” Correct “have” to “had,” “at my birthday” to “for my birthday,” and “I ride” to “I rode.” Avoid repetition such as “It was it was,” and use more natural expressions like “a memorable moment” and “we had a lot of fun.” Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence followed by the gift, its importance, and how you used it. You could also replace “different places to visit near my house” with the more natural phrase “places near my house.”

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and my grandfather gave it to me for my birthday. It was a memorable moment because it was my first bike. I rode it every evening with my friends and explored the streets near my house. We had a lot of fun together.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason and avoid unclear or repeated phrases such as “we nephew” and “the nephew’s people.” Use “people in my country” or “many Nepalese people” if that is what you mean. Also, use the plural forms “bikes” and “young people,” and identify the type of bike accurately—for example, “dirt bikes” if that is your intended meaning. Link your ideas with “especially” or “for example,” and provide one specific detail about who uses bikes or why they are popular.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them to travel around their neighborhoods because they are affordable and convenient. Dirt bikes are also popular among teenagers who enjoy riding them for fun. However, traffic and road safety can sometimes be a concern.

× Yes, I have one cycle when I was a child which was given by my grandfather at my birthday.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was given to me by my grandfather for my birthday.

The question asks about a past experience, so have should be changed to had. Had is the past tense of have.

× Yes, I have one cycle when I was a child which was given by my grandfather at my birthday.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was given to me by my grandfather on my birthday.

We use on with a specific day or date, so on my birthday is the correct prepositional phrase. For my birthday is also natural when referring to a birthday gift.

× It was it was very surprising moment of my life because it was my first bicycle.

✓ It was a very surprising moment in my life because it was my first bicycle.

A singular countable noun such as moment needs an article. The indefinite article a is required before very surprising moment. The repeated words it was should also be stated only once.

× I ride the bicycle every day with my friends in the evening going to different places to visit near my house and it was so funny.

✓ I rode my bicycle every day with my friends in the evening, visiting different places near my house, and it was a lot of fun.

Because the student is describing childhood in the past, ride should be changed to its past form rode. The past tense keeps the whole story consistent.

× I ride the bicycle every day with my friends in the evening going to different places to visit near my house and it was so funny.

✓ I rode my bicycle every day with my friends in the evening and visited different places near my house. It was a lot of fun.

The original sentence contains too many ideas joined together without a clear structure. Dividing it into two sentences and using parallel verbs, rode and visited, makes the meaning clearer and more natural.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because we nephew we nephews travel a lot with our bike the nephew's people favorite bike is tort bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because we Nepalese people travel a lot by bike. Nepalese people's favorite type of bike is a touring bike.

The original sentence uses inconsistent and incorrect singular and plural forms, such as nephew and nephews. Use the plural expression Nepalese people for people from Nepal. Also, use bikes or the general expression by bike when discussing bicycles in general.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because we nephew we nephews travel a lot with our bike the nephew's people favorite bike is tort bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because we Nepalese people travel a lot by bike. Nepalese people's favorite type of bike is a touring bike.

By bike is the usual expression for describing transportation. With our bike is possible in a different context, but by bike is more natural when speaking generally about traveling by bicycle.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because we nephew we nephews travel a lot with our bike the nephew's people favorite bike is tort bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because we Nepalese people travel a lot by bike. Nepalese people's favorite type of bike is a touring bike.

A singular countable noun needs an article. Therefore, use a touring bike rather than touring bike. The phrase favorite type of bike also makes the noun phrase complete and clear.

× It is very popular among the youngster.

✓ It is very popular among youngsters.

The sentence refers to young people in general, so the plural form youngsters is needed. No article is necessary before youngsters when speaking about young people generally.