Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cavab sualla əlaqəli deyil və məna baxımından aydın başa düşülmür. Əvvəlcə birbaşa “Yes” və ya “No” ilə cavab verin, sonra uşaqlıqda velosipedinizin olub-olmadığını və ondan necə istifadə etdiyinizi izah edin. Fikirləri tam cümlələrlə ifadə edin və təkrarlanan sözlərdən, eləcə də əlaqəsiz ifadələrdən çəkinin.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed using it.

Sugestão: Cavab velosipedlər haqqında deyil, film haqqında danışır və cümlə tamamlanmamış qalır. Mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayaraq ölkənizdə velosipedlərin nə dərəcədə populyar olduğunu bildirin. Daha sonra konkret səbəb və ya nümunə əlavə edin; məsələn, insanların velosipeddən nəqliyyat, idman və ya istirahət üçün istifadə etdiyini deyə bilərsiniz. “And” sözünü təkrar etmək əvəzinə fikirləri məntiqli bağlayıcılarla birləşdirin.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them for exercise and short journeys because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. However, cycling is more common in smaller towns than in crowded cities because of the heavy traffic.

× They they enemies, enemies they.

✓ They are enemies.

This is a sentence fragment because it does not contain a correctly formed verb. Use the verb 'are' after the subject 'they' to form a complete sentence. The repeated words should also be removed.

× They take take their revenge on their.

✓ They take revenge on them.

The verb 'take' agrees with the plural subject 'they', but it should not be repeated. The pronoun 'their' is possessive and cannot be used after the preposition 'on' in this sentence. Use the object pronoun 'them' instead.

× track on the movie is very good.

✓ The track in the movie is very good.

A singular countable noun such as 'track' usually needs a determiner. Use 'the' because the speaker is referring to a specific track. The preposition 'in' is more appropriate than 'on' when referring to a track included in a movie.

× And I also love the plot of this movie and the plant is really interesting for.

✓ I also love the plot of this movie, and it is really interesting.

The sentence contains a repeated conjunction, an incorrect word choice, and an incomplete ending. Use 'it' to refer to 'the plot' and remove the unnecessary word 'for'. Starting with 'And' is not necessary here because this is a complete answer.