Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng mắc lỗi dùng từ và cấu trúc: “went to bike” nên đổi thành “rode my bike”, còn “by school” nên đổi thành “to school”. Ngoài ra, “with my father” có thể gây mơ hồ về việc bạn đi xe cùng bố hay bố đưa bạn đi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể như tần suất hoặc mục đích sử dụng xe đạp.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often rode my bike to school with my father. It was a fun way to start the day, and I became more confident at cycling over time.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và đưa ra lý do liên quan đến môi trường, nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Nên nói “In my country, Vietnam, bikes are very popular” thay vì “in my country is Vietnam”, và dùng “ride bikes to school or to go shopping” thay vì “go to buy bike”. Hãy dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “as a result” để liên kết nguyên nhân và kết quả, đồng thời thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về học sinh, người đi làm hoặc tình trạng giao thông.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. Many people ride them to school, work, or nearby shops because they are affordable and convenient. In addition, cycling is environmentally friendly and helps reduce traffic congestion.

× I went to bike by school with my father.

✓ I rode my bike to school with my father.

The preposition by is incorrect here because it does not show movement toward a destination. Use to before the destination school. Also, rode my bike is the natural past-tense expression for traveling by bicycle.

× I think in my country is Vietnam Bikes are so popular

✓ Yeah, I think my country is Vietnam, where bikes are very popular.

The original sentence incorrectly places in my country before the verb and joins two independent ideas without proper punctuation or structure. Use my country is Vietnam as a complete clause, and use where to connect the information about bikes.

× Bikes are so popular like people also go to school or go to buy bike.

✓ Bikes are so popular that people use them to go to school or to buy things.

Like is not the correct conjunction for expressing a result in this sentence. Use the structure so ... that to show that the popularity of bikes leads to a result. The parallel structure to go to school or to buy things is also clearer.

× go to buy bike

✓ go to buy a bike

A singular countable noun such as bike normally needs an article or another determiner. Use a bike when referring to one unspecified bicycle.

× It's so friendly with the environment.

✓ They are so friendly to the environment.

The natural preposition in the expression environmentally friendly is to, not with. Since bikes are plural, use the pronoun they instead of it.