Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ начинается прямо, но содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и обрывается. Используйте правильную конструкцию “bought it for me”, а возраст лучше выразить как “when I was seven or eight”. После этого добавьте один конкретный результат или пример. Избегайте повторения “ride and ride and ride” и следите за временем глагола: после рассказа о прошлом нужно использовать “rode”. Завершайте ответ полным предложением.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven or eight years old. I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school, and I really enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит правильную общую идею, но формулировка недостаточно понятна из-за ошибок в словах и грамматике. Используйте “people of all ages” вместо “old young boys and girls”, а выражение “phone off” необходимо заменить на подходящий глагол, например “prefer” или “often go”. Начните с чёткого ответа “Yes, they are quite popular”, затем объясните причину и приведите конкретную деталь о местах или группах людей. Свяжите идеи с помощью “because”, “especially” или “for example”.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. People of all ages, especially children and young adults, often ride them around their neighbourhoods. In some cities, many people also use bicycles to commute to work.

× My parents bought it to me when I was about eight or seven years old.

✓ My parents bought it for me when I was about seven or eight years old.

The verb buy takes the preposition for when we identify the person who receives or benefits from the purchase. We say buy something for someone, not buy something to someone.

× I took my bicycle and ride and ride and ride around my

✓ I took my bicycle and rode around my neighbourhood.

The answer describes a past experience, so the verb ride must be in the past tense: rode. Use the past tense consistently when talking about childhood events.

× I took my bicycle and ride and ride and ride around my

✓ I took my bicycle and rode around my neighbourhood.

The original sentence is incomplete because it ends with around my and does not identify the place. Complete the prepositional phrase by adding a noun, such as neighbourhood.

× Actually I can say yes because old young boys and girls phone off to ride the bicycle around their neighbourhood

✓ Actually, yes, because both young and old people often ride bicycles around their neighbourhoods.

When presenting two contrasting groups, use the paired conjunction both ... and. The original phrase old young does not connect the two adjectives correctly. Practise using both ... and to join two equivalent ideas.

× Actually I can say yes because old young boys and girls phone off to ride the bicycle around their neighbourhood

✓ Actually, yes, because both young and old people often ride bicycles around their neighbourhoods.

The intended adverb is often, not phone off. With a main verb such as ride, the frequency adverb usually comes before the verb: often ride. Practise placing frequency adverbs such as often, usually, and sometimes before the main verb.

× Actually I can say yes because old young boys and girls phone off to ride the bicycle around their neighbourhood

✓ Actually, yes, because both young and old people often ride bicycles around their neighbourhoods.

The sentence refers to bicycles and neighbourhoods in general, so plural nouns are more appropriate: bicycles and neighbourhoods. Use plural nouns when discussing general habits or things shared by multiple people.