Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có thêm chi tiết về màu sắc cũng như việc vẫn giữ chiếc xe, nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt khiến câu trả lời chưa tự nhiên. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ đơn trong “I bought it when I was a child” và dùng “I loved it because it was pink” thay cho “I love you so much it pink color”. Ngoài ra, “I still keep it” hoặc “I still have it” tự nhiên hơn “I keep it to stay until now”. Nên sắp xếp câu trả lời theo cấu trúc: trả lời trực tiếp, nêu đặc điểm, rồi thêm thông tin hiện tại.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I bought a pink bike when I was about eight years old, and I really loved it. I still have it, although I don’t ride it anymore.

Sugestão: Bạn đưa ra quan điểm rõ ràng và có ví dụ về trẻ em đạp xe sau giờ học, nhưng cần sửa cấu trúc câu và cách dùng từ. Hãy nói “Bikes are very popular in Vietnam” thay cho “in Vietnam by very popular”, và dùng “Most children have a bike” thay cho “every kid has bike” để diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Cụm “so we actually come back from school” không phù hợp ngữ cảnh; có thể thay bằng “After school, we often ride our bikes to the park together”. Hãy dùng từ nối như “especially” hoặc “for example” để liên kết ý và tránh câu quá dài.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in Vietnam, especially among children. For example, after school, many kids ride their bikes to the park and play with their friends. They are also a convenient and affordable way to get around.

× Yes, I have buy when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I bought one when I was a child.

Use the simple past tense, bought, because the action happened at a specific time in the past, when I was a child. One replaces a bike to avoid unnecessary repetition.

× I love you so much it pink color.

✓ I loved its pink color very much.

Use the simple past tense, loved, because the speaker is describing feelings about the bike in the past. Its is the possessive form needed before pink color.

× I love you so much it pink color.

✓ I loved its pink color very much.

You refers to a person, but the speaker is referring to the bike. Use its to show that the pink color belongs to the bike. Do not confuse its, meaning belonging to it, with it's, meaning it is.

× I keep it to stay until now.

✓ I have kept it until now.

Use the present perfect, have kept, for an action that began in the past and continues up to the present. The phrase until now commonly requires this tense in this context.

× Yes, in Vietnam by very popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in Vietnam.

The sentence needs the verb are. Bikes is a plural subject, so it must be followed by the plural form are.

× Every kid has bike.

✓ Every kid has a bike.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun bike. A bike means one bike in general.

× And every afternoon, so we actually come back from school, we often take the bike, go to park together.

✓ Every afternoon, when we come back from school, we often ride our bikes to the park together.

Use when to introduce the time clause. So does not correctly connect the time clause to the main clause in this sentence.

× And every afternoon, so we actually come back from school, we often take the bike, go to park together.

✓ Every afternoon, when we come back from school, we often ride our bikes to the park together.

Park is a singular countable noun in this sentence, so it needs the definite article the. The park refers to a specific place where the children go.