Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is direct, well-developed, and uses a clear reason and specific detail. To sound more natural, replace “ride on bike” with “small bicycle” or “small bike.” You could also use a linking word such as “As a result” to connect the bike with your feeling of independence. Keep the answer concise, as you have done.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bicycle for my sixth birthday. I loved it because it made me feel independent; as a result, I often rode around the neighborhood with my friends.

Sugestão: This is a clear and effective response with a direct opinion, several relevant reasons, and strong vocabulary such as “commute,” “convenient,” and “practical choice.” For slightly more natural phrasing, say “ride to parks” instead of “ride to parks for exercise,” or mention a specific example of who uses bikes. Avoid listing too many reasons without a concrete detail if you want to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people cycle to work or ride to nearby parks for exercise, especially in large cities. They are affordable, easy to park, and useful in heavy traffic, so they are a practical form of everyday transport.

× Yes I did, my parents bought me a bike for my 6th birthday.

✓ Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike for my 6th birthday.

The original sentence joins two independent clauses with only a comma, creating a comma splice. Use a period to separate the clauses. Also, add a comma after Yes in the short answer.