Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and use the past tense consistently. “I have a bike” should be “I had a bike,” and “my parents love me to have some fun” should be “my parents wanted me to have fun.” Avoid the unclear phrase “every day is after having to study.” Also, say “I loved riding my bike” rather than “I love bike.” Use one clear reason and a specific detail to make the answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me because they wanted me to have some fun after studying. I often rode it around my neighborhood, and it helped me relax.

Sugestão: Give your opinion immediately instead of beginning with “It is a good question.” Replace “As I know” with “As far as I know,” and use “travel from one place to another” instead of “transfer from place to another place.” Avoid the repeated “to” and the vague ending “So yeah.” Add a specific comparison or example, such as the popularity of cars in cities or bikes among young people.

Exemplo: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. As far as I know, most people prefer cars because they are more convenient for travelling from one place to another. However, bikes are becoming more common among young people who use them for exercise and short trips.

× Actually yes, I have a bike when I was a child because my parents love me to have some fun every day is after having to study.

✓ Actually, yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my parents loved me to have some fun every day after studying.

The question refers to the past, so have must change to had and love must change to loved. After is followed by the -ing form when describing an activity, so studying is needed instead of having to study.

× Actually yes, I have a bike when I was a child because my parents love me to have some fun every day is after having to study.

✓ Actually, yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my parents wanted me to have some fun every day after studying.

The structure love me to have is unnatural in this context, and every day is after having to study is not grammatically complete. Use wanted me to have and place the time expression after studying to create a clear sentence.

× So I love bike because it makes me feel better.

✓ So I love bikes because they make me feel better.

When talking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular noun bike without an article. Because bikes is plural, the pronoun and verb should also be they and make.

× So I love bike because it makes me feel better.

✓ So I love bikes because they make me feel better.

The pronoun it refers to one singular thing, but the corrected subject bikes is plural. Therefore, use the plural pronoun they.

× So I love bike because it makes me feel better.

✓ So I love bikes because they make me feel better.

A plural subject takes a plural verb. Since bikes is plural, use make rather than makes.

× It is a good question. As I know, it is not very popular in my country because people use cars to to transfer from place to another place.

✓ It is a good question. As far as I know, bikes are not very popular in my country because people use cars to travel from one place to another.

The expressions from one place to another and travel from one place to another are the correct prepositional patterns. The repeated to should be removed, and another does not need the noun place repeated after it.

× It is a good question. As I know, it is not very popular in my country because people use cars to to transfer from place to another place.

✓ It is a good question. As far as I know, bikes are not very popular in my country because people use cars to travel from one place to another.

The phrase to to transfer contains a repeated infinitive marker, and transfer is not the natural verb for describing movement by car. Use to travel to form a clear and natural sentence.