Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 과거의 경험을 묻는 질문이므로 현재형인 “have” 대신 과거형 “had”를 사용해야 합니다. 먼저 “Yes, I did”로 질문에 직접 답한 뒤, 자전거를 언제 또는 어떻게 사용했는지 구체적인 세부 사항을 한 문장 덧붙이면 더 자연스럽고 효과적입니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Sugestão: 질문에 “Yes, I think they are becoming more popular”처럼 직접 답하고, 일반적인 대상을 말할 때는 단수 “the bike”보다 복수형 “bikes”를 사용하는 것이 적절합니다. “is become”은 “are becoming”으로, “than past”는 “than in the past”로 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 “many people, they”처럼 주어를 반복하지 말고, “reduce the”에서 문장을 중단하지 않도록 “reduce air pollution”처럼 내용을 완성하세요. 기후 변화와 환경 보호라는 이유를 연결어 “because”로 설명하면 더 논리적입니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular than in the past. Many people are becoming more aware of climate change and their responsibility to protect the environment. In addition, cycling helps reduce air pollution and is a convenient way to travel short distances.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past, so the past-tense form had is required instead of the present-tense form have.

× Yeah, recently I think the bike is become more popular than past because many people, they just realize the climate change and we have responsibility to protect the earth and to reduce the.

✓ Yeah, recently, I think bikes have become more popular than they were in the past because many people have realized that climate change is a problem, and we have a responsibility to protect the Earth and reduce pollution.

Bikes is used because the speaker is discussing bikes in general, not one specific bike. A plural countable noun is needed in this general meaning.

× Yeah, recently I think the bike is become more popular than past because many people, they just realize the climate change and we have responsibility to protect the earth and to reduce the.

✓ Yeah, recently, I think bikes have become more popular than they were in the past because many people have realized that climate change is a problem, and we have a responsibility to protect the Earth and reduce pollution.

Have become is the correct present perfect form for a change that started in the past and continues to the present. Have realized is also suitable because people have come to understand this issue recently.

× Yeah, recently I think the bike is become more popular than past because many people, they just realize the climate change and we have responsibility to protect the earth and to reduce the.

✓ Yeah, recently, I think bikes have become more popular than they were in the past because many people have realized that climate change is a problem, and we have a responsibility to protect the Earth and reduce pollution.

The expression than past is incomplete. Use than they were in the past to make the comparison grammatically complete and add the necessary preposition in.

× Yeah, recently I think the bike is become more popular than past because many people, they just realize the climate change and we have responsibility to protect the earth and to reduce the.

✓ Yeah, recently, I think bikes have become more popular than they were in the past because many people have realized that climate change is a problem, and we have a responsibility to protect the Earth and reduce pollution.

Many people already functions as the subject of the clause, so the additional pronoun they is redundant. Use either many people have realized or they have realized, but not both together.

× Yeah, recently I think the bike is become more popular than past because many people, they just realize the climate change and we have responsibility to protect the earth and to reduce the.

✓ Yeah, recently, I think bikes have become more popular than they were in the past because many people have realized that climate change is a problem, and we have a responsibility to protect the Earth and reduce pollution.

Responsibility is a singular countable noun in this expression, so it needs the indefinite article a: a responsibility. The phrase climate change is normally used without the definite article the when referring to the general phenomenon.

× Yeah, recently I think the bike is become more popular than past because many people, they just realize the climate change and we have responsibility to protect the earth and to reduce the.

✓ Yeah, recently, I think bikes have become more popular than they were in the past because many people have realized that climate change is a problem, and we have a responsibility to protect the Earth and reduce pollution.

The original sentence ends with the incomplete phrase reduce the. The object after reduce must be completed, such as pollution. The sentence also needs clearer clause structure and punctuation to connect the ideas smoothly.