Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

No, I didn't have bike when I was a child.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

No, bikes aren't really popular in my country, mainly because we live in a big city so riding bikes can be dangerous.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: Répondez directement, puis ajoutez un détail pour rendre la réponse plus naturelle et complète. Il faut employer l'article « a » devant « bike » : « I didn't have a bike ». Vous pourriez expliquer pourquoi vous n'en aviez pas ou mentionner une activité que vous pratiquiez à la place.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was safer for me to play in the park near our home instead.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 82.0

Sugestão: La réponse est claire et contient une raison pertinente, mais « we live in a big city » généralise un peu trop. Utilisez plutôt « many people live in large cities » et ajoutez un détail précis, comme la circulation dense ou le manque de pistes cyclables. Employez un mot de liaison pour séparer clairement l'opinion et sa justification, par exemple « mainly because » ou « as a result ».

Exemplo: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country, mainly because many people live in large cities. The traffic is often heavy, and there aren’t enough dedicated bike lanes, so cycling can feel unsafe.

Gramática

22: Article errors

× No, I didn't have bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun bike requires an article. Use a before bike because you are referring to one nonspecific bike. A useful improvement is to check singular countable nouns after have and add a, an, or the when necessary.

Vocabulário

Big— Large; Elder; Important; Ambitious
Dangerous— Menacing; Hazardous
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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