Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood: use “Yes, I had a bike,” not “Yes, I have a bike.” Avoid confusing and repeated phrases such as “my parents, they used, they need” and “when I was killed.” Explain the main reason clearly, and add one specific detail about how you used the bike. Use linking words such as “because” and “so” to connect your ideas. Also, keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it because they needed a convenient way to travel to their shops in our town. I often rode it around the neighborhood and used it to help my parents with small errands.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first and then support it with specific reasons. Correct the grammar in “bike are” and “My country name is Nepal” by saying “bikes are” and “My country is Nepal.” Avoid repetition, including “there are there are” and “for many purposes for their uses.” Explain which types of people use bikes and why, such as commuting, avoiding traffic, or saving money. The information about Nepal being beautiful is not directly relevant, so replace it with a relevant example.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in Nepal, especially in cities and smaller towns. Many people use motorcycles to commute because they are affordable and can move through busy traffic more easily than cars. Bicycles are also common among students and people who want an inexpensive way to travel.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about your childhood, so you should use the past tense. Use had instead of have because the possession occurred in the past.

× When I was child

✓ When I was a child

A singular countable noun such as child normally needs an article. Use a before child.

× When I was child, because my parents, they used, they need to go to the duties our Shoppes in our Pittama town, so they have to go to the business.

✓ When I was a child, my parents needed to go to their shops in our town, so they had a bike.

The original sentence contains disconnected clauses, repeated subjects, and incomplete or unclear phrases. Combine the ideas into a complete sentence with one clear subject and logical clauses. Because the story is about the past, use needed and had.

× When I was child, because my parents, they used, they need to go to the duties our Shoppes in our Pittama town, so they have to go to the business.

✓ When I was a child, my parents needed to go to their shops in our town, so they had a bike.

The answer describes a past situation, so need and have to should be expressed in the past. Use needed and had.

× So we have a bike when I was killed, of course.

✓ So, of course, we had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I was killed is not appropriate in this context and appears to be a transcription error for when I was a child. Since the event happened in childhood, use had instead of have.

× Yes, of course bike are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are popular in our country.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes. The plural subject bikes correctly takes the plural verb are.

× Yes, of course bike are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are popular in our country.

The singular noun bike needs an article, but the intended meaning is general. The most natural correction is to use the plural form bikes without an article.

× There are there are many bikes, many kind of band bike are there in our country

✓ There are many bikes and many kinds of bicycles in our country.

There are is unnecessarily repeated. Use it once to introduce the existence of something. Also, use many kinds rather than many kind because kinds refers to more than one type.

× There are there are many bikes, many kind of band bike are there in our country

✓ There are many bikes and many kinds of bicycles in our country.

Many must be followed by a plural noun. Therefore, use kinds instead of kind. Bicycles is also plural because the sentence refers to different types of bicycles.

× Because mainly the per the people they use the bike for many purposes for their uses.

✓ People mainly use bikes for many purposes.

The original sentence has repeated words and an unclear structure. Use a simple subject-verb-object structure: people as the subject, use as the verb, and bikes as the object.

× Because mainly the per the people they use the bike for many purposes for their uses.

✓ People mainly use bikes for many purposes.

When referring to bikes in general, do not use the before bikes. Use the plural noun bikes without an article.