Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is direct and well developed, with relevant details about how and where you used your bike. However, avoid repeating “I had a bike,” and maintain consistent verb forms when describing past habits. Since you are talking about the past, use “cycled,” “grabbed some snacks,” and “rode it to visit my friends” instead of “cycle,” “grab,” and “roll it.”

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike around my neighborhood almost every day. For example, I often cycled to the supermarket to buy some snacks, and I sometimes rode it to visit friends who lived nearby.

Sugestão: You give a clear opinion and support it with a logical reason and contrasting example. Improve the grammar in “so people who sweat” by changing it to “so people sweat” or “which makes people sweat.” You could also use more natural vocabulary, such as “short journeys” or “short commutes,” and specify who tends to use bikes and where.

Exemplo: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in Thailand because the climate is hot and humid, which makes people sweat when they cycle. However, some people still use them for short commutes or exercise, particularly in parks or during the cooler months. In large cities, cycling is also becoming more popular among younger people.

× I often cycle to the supermarket, grab some snack and sometimes I roll it to visit my friends who live nearby.

✓ I often cycled to the supermarket, grabbed some snacks, and sometimes rolled it to visit my friends who lived nearby.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use cycled, grabbed, and rolled instead of the present-tense forms cycle, grab, and roll. Lived also agrees with the past-time context.

× I often cycle to the supermarket, grab some snack and sometimes I roll it to visit my friends who live nearby.

✓ I often cycled to the supermarket, grabbed some snacks, and sometimes rolled it to visit my friends who lived nearby.

Some is normally used with plural countable nouns. Therefore, snack should be changed to snacks. Remember to use some + plural countable noun, such as some snacks or some books.

× Well, I don't think bikes are very popular in Thailand because the climate is so hot and humid, so people who sweat if they cycle every day.

✓ Well, I don't think bikes are very popular in Thailand because the climate is so hot and humid, and people sweat when they cycle every day.

Because and so should not be used together in this structure to introduce the same cause-and-effect relationship. In addition, people sweat is a complete clause, whereas people who sweat is an incomplete relative clause here. Use and to connect the two ideas, and use when to introduce the time condition.