Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes I did have a bike

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

I think not, or maybe not really, because infrastructure in our country is not good enough for bikes.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: Ответ грамматически понятен и напрямую отвечает на вопрос, но звучит немного неестественно из-за лишнего повторения «did have» и слишком короткий. Используйте простую естественную конструкцию «Yes, I did» и добавьте одну конкретную деталь: как часто вы катались, где именно или для чего использовали велосипед.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 68.0

Sugestão: Ответ содержит мнение и причину, что делает его более содержательным. Однако начало «I think not, or maybe not really» звучит неуверенно, а выражение «infrastructure ... is not good enough for bikes» можно заменить на более естественное «there isn’t enough cycling infrastructure». Сформулируйте позицию более уверенно и добавьте конкретный пример, например отсутствие велодорожек или небезопасное движение на дорогах.

Exemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because there isn’t enough cycling infrastructure. For example, many cities have very few bike lanes, so people often feel unsafe riding alongside heavy traffic.

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