Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, I don't have a bike when I was a child 'cause I can't ride it even now.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
I think reading a bag become more and more popular in my country 'cause there comes a lot of sharing bags. People use it for job, for work and for school. Go to school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: 回答基本直接,但时态和表达不准确。“when I was a child”应搭配一般过去时,因此应说“didn't have”。另外,“I can't ride it even now”虽然能说明原因,但逻辑上更自然的表达是“because I never learned how to ride one”。建议使用“直接回答 + 原因”的结构,并避免使用口语化且不够自然的“'cause”。
Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I never learned how to ride one. I still can’t ride a bike very well, so I’ve never really been interested in cycling.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 12.0Sugestão: 回答没有准确回应“自行车是否受欢迎”,主要内容似乎偏离到“包”或“共享单车”。应先明确回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”,然后说明具体原因。注意主谓一致和时态,例如“bikes are becoming”,并使用准确词汇,如“shared bikes”而不是“sharing bags”。建议提供一至两个具体场景,例如人们骑共享单车上下班或上学,这样内容会更连贯、更有针对性。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are becoming increasingly popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes to commute to work or school because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. They also help people avoid traffic jams.
× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child 'cause I can't ride it even now.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I can't ride one even now.
“when I was a child”表示过去的时间,所以“have”应改为过去式“had”。在否定句中使用助动词“did”后,实义动词要用原形“have”,因此是“didn't have”。“can't ride”描述现在仍然不会骑车,使用现在时是正确的。
× I think reading a bag become more and more popular in my country 'cause there comes a lot of sharing bags.
✓ I think reading a bag becomes more and more popular in my country because there comes a lot of sharing bags.
“reading a bag”在句中充当主语,属于单数概念,因此后面的动词要用第三人称单数形式。“become”应改为“becomes”。“'cause”是口语缩写,正式表达中建议使用“because”。
× there comes a lot of sharing bags.
✓ There are a lot of sharing bags.
“a lot of sharing bags”表示复数,所以“There be”结构中应使用“are”,而不是“comes”。基本结构是“There are + 复数名词”。
× People use it for job, for work and for school.
✓ People use them for a job, for work, and for school.
前文谈论的是复数名词“bikes”,所以代词应使用复数宾格“them”,不能使用单数“it”。
× People use it for job, for work and for school.
✓ People use it for a job, for work and for school.
“job”是可数名词单数,前面通常需要冠词。这里应使用不定冠词“a”,所以应说“for a job”。“work”和“school”在这里是不可数名词或固定用法,通常不需要冠词。