Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly using the past tense because you are talking about your childhood. Correct the verb forms: use “had” instead of “do have,” “rode” instead of “ride,” and “when I was four or five” instead of “when I have it.” Also, say “in my free time” rather than “on my leisure time.” Add one specific detail about where or how you used the bike, and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red and blue, and I got it when I was about four or five years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood in my free time, especially during the weekends.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular.” Use correct plural forms and parallel structures: “ride bikes to work or cycle in the evening.” Replace “finance show” and the unfinished ending with a clear explanation. Use linking words such as “because” and “also” to connect your reasons, and give a specific example or comparison. Avoid repeating the same idea and finish the answer clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or cycle in the evening because cycling is cheaper and more convenient than driving. It is especially common among students and people who want to avoid traffic or save money on transportation.

× I do have a bike, it was red and blue.

✓ I had a bike; it was red and blue.

The question asks about the student’s childhood, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of the present-tense form do have.

× I do have a bike, it was red and blue.

✓ I had a bike. It was red and blue.

Two independent clauses should not be joined with only a comma. Use a full stop or a semicolon to separate them.

× I usually ride on my bike on my leisure time.

✓ I usually rode my bike in my free time.

Because the answer refers to the student’s childhood, rode is required. Rode my bike is the natural verb phrase, and in my free time is the correct expression.

× I usually ride on my bike on my leisure time.

✓ I usually rode my bike in my free time.

Use in, not on, before the expression my free time. Also, English normally uses ride my bike rather than ride on my bike in this context.

× I have it when I was like 4 or 5.

✓ I had it when I was about four or five.

The verb have must be in the past tense because the sentence describes a time in the past. About is more natural than like in this answer.

× I’ll say yes it is.

✓ I’d say yes, they are.

The noun bikes is plural, so it must be replaced by the plural pronoun they, followed by are. The answer should also contain a comma after yes.

× Most people ride bike to work or cycling in the evening.

✓ Most people ride bikes to work or cycle in the evening.

The plural noun bikes is needed because the sentence refers to bicycles in general. The verb forms should also be parallel: ride and cycle.

× Most people ride bike to work or cycling in the evening.

✓ Most people ride bikes to work or cycle in the evening.

The two activities joined by or should have parallel grammatical forms. Use ride and cycle, not ride and cycling.

× It’s way cheaper and convenient, especially for those who struggle with finance.

✓ It’s much cheaper and more convenient, especially for those who struggle financially.

When comparing two qualities, both adjectives should use the comparative form: cheaper and more convenient. Financially is the correct adverb to describe how people struggle.

× It’s way cheaper and convenient, especially for those who struggle with finance.

✓ It’s much cheaper and more convenient, especially for those who struggle financially.

Financially is an adverb and correctly modifies the verb struggle. The phrase struggle with finance is unnatural in this context.

× especially for those who struggle with finance show and it’s more.

✓ Bikes are especially useful for people who struggle financially because they are cheaper and more convenient.

The original wording is incomplete and contains unclear words, so the relationship between the ideas is not grammatically clear. This version uses a complete sentence and because to show the reason.