Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly in the past tense: say “Yes, I had a bike.” Correct “have” to “had,” “when I’m a child” to “when I was a child,” and “white color” to “white.” Use “hand-me-down” instead of “pass down bike.” Complete your final sentence and add one specific detail about how often you rode it or why you enjoyed it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “also” to connect the details.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was white and was a hand-me-down from my older brother. I often rode it to the park near my house because I enjoyed cycling with my friends. It was quite old, but it was still reliable.

Sugestão: Your opinion is clear, but avoid repeating “in my country” and improve the grammar of “track that is for the bike the people to ride the bike.” Say “there aren’t many bicycle lanes or cycling paths.” Organize the response with a clear reason and a specific result or comparison. Replace “It’s mostly cars” with “Most people rely on cars for transportation” for greater accuracy and naturalness.

Exemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. The main reason is that there aren’t many bicycle lanes or safe cycling paths, so people usually prefer to travel by car. In addition, the roads are often crowded, which can make cycling dangerous. However, bicycles are becoming more popular among young people and fitness enthusiasts.

× Well, yes, I have a bike when I'm a child.

✓ Well, yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, when you were a child, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use had instead of have and was instead of am.

× The bike that I have is white color.

✓ The bike that I had was white.

Because you are describing a bike you owned as a child, use the past tense had and was. White is an adjective, so do not use color after it in this sentence.

× It's a pass down bike from my brother.

✓ It was a passed-down bike from my brother.

The verb pass needs its past participle form, passed, because the bike was given to you by your brother. When passed down describes a noun, it is written as the compound adjective passed-down. The verb was also agrees with the past-time context.

× I always ride the bike to the park to.

✓ I always rode the bike to the park.

Since you are talking about your childhood, use the past tense rode instead of ride. The final to is unnecessary because the sentence is complete after park.

× They do not have a lot of track for people to ride bikes on.

✓ They do not have a lot of tracks for people to ride bikes on.

After a lot of, use a plural countable noun. Therefore, track should be tracks.

× They do not have a lot of tracks for people to ride bikes.

✓ They do not have a lot of tracks for people to ride bikes on.

When ride describes movement along a surface or route, use the preposition on. The phrase ride bikes on tracks is grammatically complete and natural.

× They do not have a lot of track that is for the bike the people to ride the bike.

✓ They do not have many bike tracks for people to ride on, so most people use cars.

The original sentence contains an unclear and disorganized noun phrase. Use bike tracks as a clear compound noun and for people to ride on as the purpose phrase. Combining the idea with so also makes the relationship between the two ideas clear.