Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Well actually I really have a bike when I was a child, but I not good at with it.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Well, it's kind of popular, uh, popularity way, uh, in the last century in my country, but in this century, people more like to choose to choose a car, uh, especially lately.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 38.0Sugestão: 回答基本切题,但存在明显的时态、句型和搭配错误。“have”应改为过去式“had”,“I not good”应改为“I wasn’t good”,“good at with it”应改为“good at riding it”。建议先直接回答“Yes, I did”,再补充具体细节,例如你何时骑车、骑车水平如何以及原因。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, but I wasn’t very good at riding it. I often lost my balance, so I usually practiced in a quiet park with my parents.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 42.0Sugestão: 回答表达了“过去流行、现在汽车更受欢迎”的对比,内容方向正确,但有较多重复和不自然表达,如“kind of popular, popularity way”“in the last century”“choose to choose”。建议使用清晰的主题句,并用“However”连接现在的情况;同时加入具体原因,例如汽车更舒适、速度更快或更适合长距离出行。
Exemplo: Bikes are still fairly popular in my country, especially among students and people who exercise regularly. However, cars have become more common in recent years because they are more comfortable and convenient for long-distance travel. In large cities, many people also choose bikes to avoid traffic jams.
× Well actually I really have a bike when I was a child, but I not good at with it.
✓ Well, actually, I really had a bike when I was a child, but I wasn't good at riding it.
“When I was a child”表示过去时间,所以“have”应改为过去式“had”。同样,“I not good”描述过去的状态,应使用过去式“wasn't”。建议看到“when I was...”等过去时间表达时,主句中的动词也要使用过去时。
× Well actually I really have a bike when I was a child, but I not good at with it.
✓ Well, actually, I really had a bike when I was a child, but I wasn't good at riding it.
“I not good”缺少系动词“be”。形容词“good”作表语时,前面需要使用“be”,这里主语是“I”,过去时应为“was”;否定形式是“wasn't”。
× Well actually I really have a bike when I was a child, but I not good at with it.
✓ Well, actually, I really had a bike when I was a child, but I wasn't good at riding it.
介词“at”后面如果接动词,动词要使用“-ing”形式,因此“ride”应改为“riding”。常见结构是“be good at doing something”,表示“擅长做某事”。
× Well actually I really have a bike when I was a child, but I not good at with it.
✓ Well, actually, I really had a bike when I was a child, but I wasn't good at riding it.
“good at with it”中的介词搭配错误。“good at”后面可以接名词或动名词,不能再使用“with”。正确搭配是“good at riding it”。
× Well, it's kind of popular, uh, popularity way, uh, in the last century in my country, but in this century, people more like to choose to choose a car, uh, especially lately.
✓ Well, bikes were quite popular in my country in the last century, but in this century, people are more likely to choose cars, especially recently.
原句用“it's”指代“bikes”,但“bikes”是复数,不能用单数代词“it”。改为直接使用复数名词“bikes”,并搭配复数形式“were”。使用代词时,要注意代词的单复数必须与所指名词一致。
× Well, it's kind of popular, uh, popularity way, uh, in the last century in my country, but in this century, people more like to choose to choose a car, uh, especially lately.
✓ Well, bikes were quite popular in my country in the last century, but in this century, people are more likely to choose cars, especially recently.
“In the last century”表示过去的时间,因此描述当时的流行程度时,应使用过去式“were”,而不是现在时“it's”。看到明确的过去时间状语时,要检查句中的谓语动词是否使用过去时。
× Well, it's kind of popular, uh, popularity way, uh, in the last century in my country, but in this century, people more like to choose to choose a car, uh, especially lately.
✓ Well, bikes were quite popular in my country in the last century, but in this century, people are more likely to choose cars, especially recently.
“popularity way”不是正确的英语表达。“popular”是形容词,可以直接描述“bikes”;另外,“people more like to choose”表达不自然,表示“更有可能选择”时应使用“people are more likely to choose”。建议区分“popular”(受欢迎的)和“popularity”(受欢迎程度)的词性及用法。
× Well, it's kind of popular, uh, popularity way, uh, in the last century in my country, but in this century, people more like to choose to choose a car, uh, especially lately.
✓ Well, bikes were quite popular in my country in the last century, but in this century, people are more likely to choose cars, especially recently.
“In this century”描述当前情况时,需要使用完整的现在时谓语。“people more like”缺少正确的谓语结构,改为“people are more likely to choose”。一般现在时中,表达“人们更可能做某事”常用“be likely to do something”。