Bike— Part 1 Relatório

PráticaPart12026-09-30 12:19:02

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

No, I did not have a bike. When I am outside, I have a bicycle in my side.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

No, I did not know the popular uh bike shop in my country, but I know, I know the popular bike name is Bullet.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and keep the tense consistent. The first sentence says you did not have a bike, but the second sentence is unclear and seems contradictory. Use “when I was outside” instead of “when I am outside,” and explain briefly why you did not have one. Use a natural phrase such as “with me” or “beside me,” if that is what you mean.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads near our home. However, I sometimes borrowed my cousin’s bicycle at the weekend.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 30.0

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion about whether bikes are popular, rather than discussing a bike shop or brand. Use the present tense because the question asks about the current situation. Support your opinion with a specific reason or example, and avoid repetition such as “I know, I know.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and fitness enthusiasts. Many people use them for exercise, while others ride to work to avoid traffic. Mountain bikes and Bullet motorcycles are particularly popular brands.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue

× When I am outside, I have a bicycle in my side.

✓ When I was outside, I had a bicycle by my side.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change am to was and have to had.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× When I am outside, I have a bicycle in my side.

✓ When I was outside, I had a bicycle by my side.

The correct preposition in the expression by my side is by, not in. By my side means next to me.

6: Present tense issue

× No, I did not know the popular uh bike shop in my country, but I know, I know the popular bike name is Bullet.

✓ No, I do not know which bike is popular in my country, but I know that Bullet is a popular bike.

The question asks about the current popularity of bikes, so the present tense is appropriate. Use do not know instead of did not know. The repeated words and hesitation have also been removed, and that correctly connects the two parts of the sentence.

Vocabulário

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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