Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly in the past tense: use “Yes, I had a bike” rather than “I do have a bite.” Correct the pronunciation and spelling distinction between “bike” and “bite.” Also, replace “for everyone in my siblings” with “for all of my siblings” and avoid the unnatural intensifier “absolutely” before “bought.” Add one specific detail about how you used the bike to make the answer more developed.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought one for each of my siblings and me, so we often rode our bikes around the neighborhood after school.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in Malaysia.” Correct “bites” to “bikes” and remove the unclear phrase “human kindly.” Use natural expressions such as “a means of transportation” and “to travel from one place to another.” The answer should also acknowledge that motorcycles and cars may be more common, if that is what you mean, and provide a specific reason or example.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Malaysia, especially motorcycles. They are a convenient and affordable means of transportation because people can use them to travel through busy traffic and get from one place to another quickly. However, bicycles are more common for exercise and short trips than for daily commuting.

× Yes, I do have a bite when I was a child because my parents absolutely bought it for everyone in my siblings.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my parents bought one for each of my siblings.

The question asks about the past, so the present-tense form do have should be changed to the past-tense form had. Use had when describing possession during childhood.

× Yes, I do have a bite when I was a child because my parents absolutely bought it for everyone in my siblings.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my parents bought one for each of my siblings.

The phrase for everyone in my siblings uses an incorrect preposition and structure. Use for each of my siblings to express that every sibling received a bike.

× Yes, I do have a bite when I was a child because my parents absolutely bought it for everyone in my siblings.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my parents bought one for each of my siblings.

Everyone is normally used for people in a complete group, but everyone in my siblings is not grammatically correct. Use each of my siblings when referring to the individual members of the group.

× In Malaysia, I do think bites are very popular human kindly, especially as transportation medium because in my country when we are going from one place to another place, we especially use bike as an alternative.

✓ In Malaysia, I think bikes are very popular among people, especially as a means of transportation. In my country, people use bikes to travel from one place to another.

Use the plural noun bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. Also, use bikes rather than the singular bike after the plural subject people use.

× In Malaysia, I do think bites are very popular human kindly, especially as transportation medium because in my country when we are going from one place to another place, we especially use bike as an alternative.

✓ In Malaysia, I think bikes are very popular among people, especially as a means of transportation. In my country, people use bikes to travel from one place to another.

The phrase popular human kindly is not correct. The preposition among is needed before people to show the group in which bikes are popular. The expression travel from one place to another also uses the correct pair of prepositions.

× In Malaysia, I do think bites are very popular human kindly, especially as transportation medium because in my country when we are going from one place to another place, we especially use bike as an alternative.

✓ In Malaysia, I think bikes are very popular among people, especially as a means of transportation. In my country, people use bikes to travel from one place to another.

Human kindly is not a correct adjective or adverb combination in this context. Use the natural expression popular among people. Also, especially should modify the relevant idea clearly, such as especially as a means of transportation.

× In Malaysia, I do think bites are very popular human kindly, especially as transportation medium because in my country when we are going from one place to another place, we especially use bike as an alternative.

✓ In Malaysia, I think bikes are very popular among people, especially as a means of transportation. In my country, people use bikes to travel from one place to another.

The singular countable noun medium needs an article, and the natural phrase is a means of transportation. Using the article a before means makes the noun phrase grammatically complete.

× In Malaysia, I do think bites are very popular human kindly, especially as transportation medium because in my country when we are going from one place to another place, we especially use bike as an alternative.

✓ In Malaysia, I think bikes are very popular among people, especially as a means of transportation. In my country, people use bikes to travel from one place to another.

The original sentence contains an unclear sequence of phrases and an awkward because clause. Divide the ideas into two sentences and use the clearer structure people use bikes to travel from one place to another.