Bike— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned how to ride it at at the age of 6.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, I think that bikes are very popular in my country because they are really convenient and eco friendly. Almost all of my friends know how to ride a bike and own one.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: Ответ дан прямо и достаточно кратко, а возраст добавляет конкретную деталь. Однако фраза “at at the age of 6” содержит повтор предлога; правильно: “at the age of 6” или “when I was six”. Чтобы ответ звучал естественнее, можно объединить идеи с помощью “and”.
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I learned to ride it at the age of six. I remember feeling really proud when I was finally able to ride without my parents’ help.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 88.0Sugestão: Ответ хорошо организован: сначала высказано мнение, затем приведены причины и конкретный пример. Следует писать “eco-friendly” через дефис. Слово “really” можно заменить более точным “highly” или убрать, чтобы избежать простого повторения; также утверждение “almost all of my friends” может звучать более естественно как “many of my friends”. Для большей содержательности можно добавить результат, например уменьшение пробок или расходов на транспорт.
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient, affordable, and eco-friendly. Many of my friends own one and use it to travel short distances, especially when they want to avoid traffic and save money on public transport.
Gramática
× I learned how to ride it at at the age of 6.
✓ I learned how to ride it at the age of 6.
The preposition 'at' is repeated. Use 'at the age of + number' to state the age when an event happened. Avoid repeating the same preposition.
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