Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời đi đúng trọng tâm và có thêm chi tiết về món quà, nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ khiến câu chưa tự nhiên. Hãy sửa “ping by” thành “pink bike”, “my dad give me” thành “my dad gave me”, và “after when I know how to ride” thành “after I learned how to ride”. Ngoài ra, dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán và tránh lặp từ “bike” quá nhiều. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích cảm xúc hoặc mô tả ngắn gọn về chiếc xe.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a pink bike that my dad gave me as a present after I learned how to ride on my own. I was really excited because it was my first bike.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu sự khác biệt giữa quá khứ và hiện tại, sau đó đưa ra lý do. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa “buys” thành “bikes” và “motorbike” thành “motorbikes” vì đang nói chung. Cụm “but not now” có thể tự nhiên hơn nếu dùng “but they are less popular nowadays”. Để câu trả lời cụ thể hơn, bạn có thể đề cập đến tình trạng giao thông, khoảng cách di chuyển hoặc sự tiện lợi của xe máy điện.

Exemplo: Bikes used to be very popular in my country, but they are less common nowadays. Many people prefer electric bikes or motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for commuting. This is especially true in big cities, where people often travel long distances and have busy schedules.

× Yes, I had a ping by that's my dad give me as a present after when I know how to ride my bike by myself. I'm really excited because this is my first bike.

✓ Yes, I had a pink bike that my dad gave me as a present after I learned how to ride a bike by myself. I was really excited because it was my first bike.

The answer describes a past experience, so the verbs should be in the past tense: gave instead of give, learned instead of know, was instead of am, and was instead of is. To improve, identify the time reference first and use past-tense verbs consistently when talking about childhood experiences.

× Yes, I had a ping by that's my dad give me as a present after when I know how to ride my bike by myself. I'm really excited because this is my first bike.

✓ Yes, I had a pink bike that my dad gave me as a present after I learned how to ride a bike by myself. I was really excited because it was my first bike.

After and when should not be used together in this sentence. Use after alone to introduce the later event. A natural pattern is after + subject + past-tense verb, as in after I learned how to ride a bike.

× Yes, I had a ping by that's my dad give me as a present after when I know how to ride my bike by myself. I'm really excited because this is my first bike.

✓ Yes, I had a pink bike that my dad gave me as a present after I learned how to ride a bike by myself. I was really excited because it was my first bike.

The relative clause should be formed with that followed by the subject and verb: that my dad gave me. The original structure that's my dad give me is incorrect because that's means that is, which does not fit this relative clause. Practice the pattern noun + that + subject + verb.

× In the past, buys were popular in my country, but not now. Nowadays people often use electric bikes or motorbike to get around because they are faster and more convenient.

✓ In the past, bikes were popular in my country, but not now. Nowadays, people often use electric bikes or motorbikes to get around because they are faster and more convenient.

Motorbike refers to one vehicle, but the sentence discusses vehicles in general after or, so it should be plural: motorbikes. Similarly, bikes is the correct plural noun in the first sentence. Use plural nouns when referring to a general category or more than one item.