Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Use the past tense consistently because you are describing your childhood: say “had,” “sold,” and “grew up” instead of “have,” “sell,” and “grow up.” Also, answer more naturally by explaining briefly why you sold it or how often you used it. Avoid repeating “when I was a child” and “when I grew up” in an awkward structure.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, but I sold it when I grew up because I no longer used it very often.

Sugestão: Start with a clear answer, such as “No, bikes are not very popular in my area.” Replace unnatural phrases like “there is very low trend” with “there is little interest in cycling,” and avoid saying “I think which.” Use linking words such as “as a result” to connect your ideas. Add a specific reason, such as heavy traffic, poor cycling infrastructure, or the hot weather.

Exemplo: No, bikes are not very popular in my area. I hardly ever see people cycling in my village or in the city, mainly because of the heavy traffic and the lack of bike lanes. As a result, many people rely on cars or motorbikes, which contributes to pollution and gives them fewer opportunities to exercise.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and I sell it when I grow up.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I sold it when I grew up.

The question asks about the past, so the verbs should be in the simple past tense. Use had instead of have, sold instead of sell, and grew instead of grow.

× Truly speaking, I never see a bike in my village or in my city and there is very low trend of bicycles around my home which I think which is very bad for the environment and also for the people who are not getting enough exercise in their daily routine.

✓ To be honest, I rarely see bicycles in my village or city, and there is a very low level of bicycle use around my home, which I think is very bad for the environment and for people who do not get enough exercise in their daily routines.

The singular countable noun trend requires an article, so use a very low trend. However, a very low level of bicycle use is more natural in this context. Also, the phrase daily routines is plural because it refers to people in general.

× Truly speaking, I never see a bike in my village or in my city and there is very low trend of bicycles around my home which I think which is very bad for the environment and also for the people who are not getting enough exercise in their daily routine.

✓ To be honest, I rarely see bicycles in my village or city. There is a very low level of bicycle use around my home, which I think is very bad for the environment and for people who do not get enough exercise in their daily routines.

The phrase which I think which is contains an unnecessary second which. The correct structure is which I think is. Separating the long sentence into two sentences also makes the ideas clearer and easier to understand.