Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor ve bisikleti kardeşinizle paylaştığınızı belirtiyor; bu, temel içeriği karşılıyor. Ancak “we had a bike” yerine “I had a bike” veya “my family had a bike” daha doğal olur. “I couldn't use it good enough” ifadesi dilbilgisi açısından hatalıdır; “I couldn't ride it very well” şeklinde kullanılmalıdır. “I couldn't use the” bölümündeki tekrar ve “we shared it with me and” şeklindeki tamamlanmamış ifade akıcılığı ciddi biçimde azaltıyor. Cevabınızı konu cümlesi, kısa bir açıklama ve geçmişe dair spesifik bir ayrıntıyla üç cümlede tamamlayabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: Yes, my family had a bike when I was a child, but my brother and I had to share it. I couldn’t ride it very well at first, so my brother usually used it more often. Still, I enjoyed cycling around our neighborhood with him.

Sugestão: Soruyu yanıtlıyor ve bisikletlerin neden popüler olduğunu açıklamaya çalışıyorsunuz; özellikle trafik ve bisiklet yollarından söz etmeniz olumlu. Ancak “And the last days of modern life” doğal değildir; “Nowadays” veya “In recent years” kullanmalısınız. Özne-fiil uyumuna dikkat edin: “bikes are more popular”, “people prefer”, “there is heavy traffic” ve “other forms of transport” daha doğru ifadelerdir. “Bike lines” yerine “bike lanes” denir. Cevabınızı “Yes, they are...” şeklinde doğrudan başlatıp bir neden ve mümkünse kısa bir sonuç ekleyerek daha düzenli ve etkili hâle getirebilirsiniz.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes have become increasingly popular in my country in recent years. This is mainly because many cities now have bike lanes, while heavy traffic makes driving less convenient. As a result, more people prefer cycling to using other forms of transport, especially for short journeys.

× I couldn't use it good enough.

✓ I couldn't use it well enough.

Well is the adverbial form of good and is needed to modify the verb use. Good is an adjective and cannot correctly describe how the student used the bike.

× But we shared it with me and.

✓ But my brother and I shared it.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends with the conjunction and. The sentence needs a complete subject and verb structure. My brother and I is the correct subject form.

× And the last days of modern life, yes, bikes is more popular in my country.

✓ In recent years, bikes have become more popular in my country.

In is the appropriate preposition for a period of time. The expression the last days of modern life is not appropriate for describing a recent period. In recent years is the natural expression.

× Bikes is more popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are more popular in my country.

Bikes is a plural subject, so it must be followed by the plural verb are, not the singular verb is.

× There are some tight traffic.

✓ There is heavy traffic.

Traffic is an uncountable noun, so it takes there is rather than there are. The natural expression is heavy traffic, not tight traffic.

× There are some tight traffic.

✓ There is heavy traffic.

Heavy is the natural adjective used with traffic. Tight does not normally describe a large amount of traffic.

× Therefore every people I observe that prefer bike to other transports.

✓ Therefore, I observe that everyone prefers bikes to other forms of transport.

Every cannot be used directly with the uncountable expression people in this sentence. Everyone is the correct pronoun for referring to all people. Also, everyone is followed by a singular verb.

× Every people I observe that prefer bike to other transports.

✓ I observe that everyone prefers bikes to other forms of transport.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so the verb must be prefers, not prefer. The phrase I observe that also creates a complete and natural sentence structure.