Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid repeating yourself. Use the correct past-tense structure: “I remember having,” not “I remember to had,” and avoid the unnecessary object pronoun in “which I loved.” Use a clear linking word such as “Also” to connect the detail about your father. Finish with a specific result or memory instead of the unclear phrase “it's Remember Me good moments.”

Exemplo: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child, and I absolutely loved it. My dad taught me how to ride it, so we spent a lot of time cycling together. As a result, I have very fond memories of riding around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: Give a complete answer with a clear topic sentence and explain why bikes are popular. Avoid the incorrect and repetitive phrase “one of the most popular median human transport transportation.” Say “one of the most popular means of transportation” instead. Use accurate sentence structure and provide a specific example, such as commuting, avoiding traffic, or cycling in Bogotá. Complete your final sentence rather than ending with “going to.”

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Bogotá. They are one of the most convenient means of transportation because they help people avoid heavy traffic and save money. For example, many residents cycle to work, and the city has built dedicated bike lanes for them.

× I remember to had a red bike.

✓ I remember having a red bike.

After remember, use a gerund when referring to a past memory: remember + verb-ing. The form to had is incorrect because had cannot follow to.

× which I love it.

✓ which I loved.

The relative pronoun which already functions as the object of loved, so the extra pronoun it is unnecessary. Because the story is about the past, loved is also appropriate.

× I remember that my dad taught me to how to ride a bike.

✓ I remember that my dad taught me how to ride a bike.

The correct structure is teach someone how to do something. Do not use to before how to.

× it's Remember Me good moments.

✓ It reminds me of good moments.

The original phrase does not form a clear grammatical sentence. Use the structure remind someone of something to express that the bike brings back memories.

× there is one of the most popular median human transport transportation in my city

✓ Bikes are among the most popular means of transportation in my city.

The expression one of the most popular must be followed by a plural noun. Among the most popular means is a clearer plural structure, and means of transportation is the correct noun phrase.

× which is Bogota for example people there are many people to use these bikes for going to

✓ For example, many people in Bogotá use bikes to get around.

The original phrase combines several incomplete clauses and uses an incorrect verb structure. Use many people use bikes, and use to get around to express purpose.