Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cümle zamanına ve yapısına dikkat edin. Geçmişten bahsederken simple past (had) kullanmalısınız ve cevap doğrudan olmalıdır. Ayrıca kısa bir konu cümlesi kurup, gerekirse bir veya iki destekleyici detay ekleyin. Örneğin bisikletin kimin olduğu, ne zaman sahip olduğunuz veya bisikleti ne sıklıkla kullandığınız gibi bilgiler ekleyebilirsiniz.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it almost every day to ride around the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Düşüncelerinizi açık ve düzenli ifade edin; gereksiz tekrar ve karışık sözcüklerden kaçının. İlk olarak doğrudan görüşünüzü söyleyin (Yes/No + kısa neden), sonra bir iki destekleyici detay verin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, for example) kullanarak mantığı netleştirin. Ayrıca 'country' tekil olarak kullanılmalı ve 'popular' doğru yerleştirilmeli.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see lots of commuters cycling to work, and cycling clubs are also common.

× When I was a child, I have.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The original sentence uses present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'When I was a child,' which is inconsistent. Use simple past 'had' to match the past time frame. Also the sentence is incomplete—add the object 'a bike' to answer the question. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past events ('I had a bike').

× I think by I think my come, my countries are bikes are popular in there and, uh, many people.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country, and many people have them.

The original sentence has redundant phrases, incorrect word order, and unclear references ('my come', 'my countries', 'in there'). This is a sentence structure and word choice problem. Correct by stating the opinion clearly: start with 'I think', then the subject and verb 'bikes are popular', specify the singular 'my country' not 'countries', and finish with a clear clause 'and many people have them.' Suggestion: simplify sentences, remove redundant words, use correct noun forms and clear pronouns ('my country', 'them').