Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabı kısmen doğrudur ancak daha doğal ve detaylı hale getirmek için bir konu cümlesi ekleyin ve 1-2 destekleyici ayrıntı verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak (for example, because, and) cümleler arasında akıcılık sağlayın. Ayrıca cümle sayısını 3–4’te tutarak gereksiz tekrarlardan kaçının.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon. It was a red bicycle with a bell, which made me very proud.

Sugestão: Cevap düzensiz ve sözdizimi hataları içeriyor; daha net bir konu cümlesi kurun ve düşüncenizi mantıklı sırayla destekleyin. Geçmiş deneyiminizden bahsederken zaman zarfları ve doğru prepozisyonları kullanın (e.g. "a month ago", "in Holland"). Fazla tekrarları çıkarın ve bağlaçlarla (however, whereas, because) fikirleri bağlayın. Maksimum 4 cümle ile net olun.

Exemplo: I think bicycles are very popular in Holland, where I visited a month ago, but they are less common in my country. During my trip, I saw many people cycling for commuting and shopping. In contrast, here most people prefer cars because the infrastructure for cycling is limited.

× Yes, I had a bike and my dad bought it for me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike, and my dad bought it for me.

The original sentence is grammatically correct; only a comma is recommended before the conjunction 'and' to improve sentence clarity. Use a comma to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: include a comma before 'and' when connecting two full clauses.

× Am I, I've been in Holland like a month ago and it was very popular in there, but in my country I think it's not.

✓ Well, I was in Holland about a month ago, and bicycles were very popular there, but in my country I don't think they are.

Multiple tense and pronoun issues: 'I've been... a month ago' mixes present perfect with a finished past time; use simple past 'I was' for a specific time expression. 'Am I' is incorrect and unnecessary as a discourse marker; replace with 'Well' or remove. 'It was very popular in there' has a vague subject and wrong preposition: use plural 'bicycles' or 'they' and 'there' without 'in'. 'In my country I think it's not' should use 'I don't think they are' to match plural subject and correct negation. Suggestions: use simple past for finished past events, ensure subject agreement and correct preposition use.

× I was thinking like maybe it is before when I went to Holland, but I saw there and there are a lot of people who uses bikes in there.

✓ I thought maybe it was like that before when I went to Holland, but I saw many people using bikes there.

'I was thinking' is a past progressive that can be acceptable, but 'I thought' is clearer for a past opinion. 'It is before' incorrectly mixes tenses and 'before' with present tense; use 'it was like that before'. 'There are a lot of people who uses' has subject-verb agreement error: 'people' requires plural verb 'use' and awkward relative clause; using 'many people using bikes' is more natural. Also drop the extra 'in' before 'there'. Suggestions: match tense consistently (use simple past for completed thoughts), use plural verbs with 'people', and prefer 'many people using' for concision.

× And now I'm thinking no, it's it's not a very.

✓ And now I think no, it's not very popular.

Awkward tense and incomplete sentence: 'I'm thinking' can be simplified to 'I think' for current opinion. The phrase 'it's it's not a very' is incomplete and repeats 'it's'; complete the idea as 'it's not very popular.' Suggestions: use concise present simple for current opinions and finish the adjective phrase with the noun 'popular'.