Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and fluency: use past simple consistently (e.g., 'I had a bike' not 'I have a bi'), remove fillers like 'uh', and make the answer concise with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Also correct pronunciation ('bike') and word order. Aim for 2–3 sentences, e.g., state you had a bike and give one specific detail (who bought it and when).

Exemplo: I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

Sugestão: Work on accuracy, vocabulary and coherence: correct country name if needed, use present simple for habits ('people ride bicycles'), avoid repetition ('daily daily'), and choose appropriate vocabulary ('eco-friendly', 'build muscles', 'get exercise'). Use a linking phrase to add a reason. Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences with specific supporting details or examples.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride bicycles every day because it’s a cheap way to travel and a good form of exercise, and it’s also eco-friendly compared with cars.

× Well, as far as I can recall when I was young, I have a bi, uh, my father bought for me when I was seven years old.

✓ Well, as far as I can recall from when I was young, I had a bike that my father bought for me when I was seven years old.

The student used 'have' (present tense) while recounting a past experience; this is a present tense issue (ID 6). Use the past tense 'had' to match the past time frame 'when I was seven years old'. Also 'a bi' is a pronunciation error; corrected to 'a bike' and restructured for clarity ('that my father bought for me'). Suggestion: when telling past experiences, consistently use past tense verbs (had, was, bought).

× Yes, of course in Nor Korea there are a lot of people who riding bicycle in a daily daily basis and it's because it allows people to exercise and make along make odd muscle and also it's really echo friendly.

✓ Yes, of course in North Korea there are a lot of people who ride bicycles on a daily basis; it's because it allows people to exercise, build muscle, and it's also really eco-friendly.

Multiple errors here: 'riding' should be base form 'ride' after 'who' (third person plural relative clause) — a third person singular/plural issue (ID 2) and subject-verb agreement (ID 27) applies; chosen primary type is third person singular issue (ID 2). Also corrected 'Nor Korea' to 'North Korea', 'bicycle' to plural 'bicycles', and 'in a daily daily basis' to 'on a daily basis'. 'Make along make odd muscle' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'build muscle'. 'Echo friendly' is a mispronunciation/spelling of 'eco-friendly'. Explanation: after relative pronoun 'who' refering to plural 'people', use base verb 'ride' (they ride). Use 'on a daily basis' as correct prepositional phrase. Use plural nouns when referring to general instances (bicycles). Use standard collocations: 'build muscle', 'eco-friendly'. Suggestion: pay attention to subject number and choose verb forms accordingly; practice common expressions and collocations.