Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Melhore a clareza e a naturalidade da resposta começando por uma frase direta e depois acrescentando razões específicas. Evite construções estranhas como “so much difficult” e prefira expressões mais naturais. Use ligações simples para ligar ideias (por exemplo, “because” ou “so”). Mantenha a resposta dentro de 2–4 frases e forneça um detalhe específico, como a sua idade ou alternativa que usava em vez de bicicleta.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike as a child because I found it hard to learn. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus, so I never really practised cycling.

Sugestão: Torne a resposta mais natural com uma frase-tópico clara e depois desenvolva com exemplos e ligações. Corrija pequenos erros gramaticais como “from the early age” para “from an early age” e use uma conjunção apropriada (for example, “and”, “so”, “for instance”). Adicione uma frase que explique porquê são populares (ex.: custo, saúde, tráfego) para enriquecer o conteúdo e usar vocabulário relevante.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. People often learn from an early age, and many use bicycles to commute to work or university because it's cheaper and faster than driving in heavy traffic.

× When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because it was so much difficult for me to learn.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because it was too difficult for me to learn.

The phrase 'so much difficult' is ungrammatical in this context. In English, 'difficult' as an adjective is modified by 'too' or 'very' rather than 'so much'. Use 'too difficult' to indicate that the difficulty prevented action. Suggestion: replace 'so much difficult' with 'too difficult' or 'very difficult' depending on intended meaning.

× It was an activity that I did not find very practical.

✓ It was an activity I did not find very practical.

The relative clause 'that I did not find very practical' is grammatical but the word 'that' is optional; removing it makes the sentence more natural in spoken English. Also consider rephrasing to 'I didn't find it very practical' to be clearer and more natural. Suggestion: use 'I didn't find it very practical' or omit 'that'.

× Bikes are very popular in my country, people learn from the early age and also it's a way to commute with places such as work, university.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country; people learn from an early age and also use them to commute to places such as work and university.

Several problems: 'from the early age' should be 'from an early age' (incorrect article/use of expression). The clause 'it's a way to commute with places' is incorrect: 'commute' requires 'to' and the means should be expressed as 'use them to commute to places'. Also run-on sentence: use a semicolon or separate sentences. Suggestion: say 'people learn from an early age' and 'they use bikes to commute to places such as work and university'.