Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and prepositions, remove hesitation, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. For example, replace “started to riding” with “started riding” and “entered in my 9th grade” with “when I was in ninth grade.” Keep to two to three sentences max.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. However, I started riding a bike when I was in ninth grade because my parents encouraged me to be more independent.

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural, structured and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words like “because” or “and.” Avoid awkward comparisons and incomplete phrases — use “use less fuel than cars” and clarify the shopping point (e.g., “convenient for short trips”).

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. This is because they use much less fuel than cars and are convenient for short trips, such as going to local shops.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but uh, I started to riding a bike when I entered in my 9th grade.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I started riding a bike when I entered 9th grade.

The verb 'start' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to' (start + verb-ing). 'Started to riding' is incorrect. Also, 'entered in my 9th grade' is unidiomatic; use 'entered 9th grade' or 'was in 9th grade'. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I started riding a bike when I entered 9th grade.' Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because bikes consume very less fuel as compared to the cars and very easy going to shop anything and.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because they consume much less fuel than cars, and they make it very easy to go shopping.

Multiple issues: 'consume very less fuel' is incorrect; use 'consume much less fuel' or 'use much less fuel' (quantifier and adverb use). 'As compared to the cars' is awkward; use 'than cars'. 'Very easy going to shop anything' is ungrammatical (sentence structure and word choice). Rephrase to 'they make it very easy to go shopping.' Also replace repeated 'bikes' with pronoun 'they' (pronoun use). Suggestions: use comparative 'much less' with 'than', use 'go shopping' for the activity, and organize into two coordinated clauses with 'and'. Grammar problem type ID: 11