Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you learned, where you rode, who taught you). Avoid fillers like “umm” and incorrect phrasing (e.g., “learning riding bicycle”). Use linking words (e.g., “so”, “but”) correctly and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. My father bought me a bicycle when I was seven and he taught me to ride it in the park near our home. At first it was difficult, but I practiced every day, so I quickly became confident and enjoyed cycling with my friends.

Sugestão: Organize your answer with a clear opening opinion, then provide specific supporting reasons and an example. Avoid repetition of “I think” and unclear phrases (e.g., “new tutorial territories”, “Hong Kong island cannot write”). Use linking words like “because” and “however” properly. Keep to 2–4 coherent sentences and include a concrete contrast if needed (e.g., some areas where bikes are less common).

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are fairly popular in parts of Hong Kong. For example, people often cycle in the New Territories for commuting and leisure because there are more open paths and quieter roads. However, on Hong Kong Island cycling is less common due to heavy traffic and hilly streets.

× Yes, I remember my dad bought me a bicycle and he taught me how to ride a bike and I was really excited because, umm, although learning riding bicycle, it's hard but I really enjoy it.

✓ Yes, I remember my dad bought me a bicycle and he taught me how to ride a bike, and I was really excited because although learning to ride a bicycle was hard, I really enjoyed it.

This sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. The main events (remembering, dad bought, taught, was excited, learning was hard) happened in the past, so verbs should be in the past tense. Also, the phrase 'learning riding bicycle' is ungrammatical; use the infinitive or gerund correctly: 'learning to ride a bicycle' or 'learning to ride' and match tense: 'was hard'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistency and use 'learn to ride' or 'learning to ride' with proper article 'a bicycle'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I think bikes are quite popular in my country so I'm living in Hong Kong and I think people prefer riding bicycles when they are going to school or going to work, but I think it is exceptional for people who live in new tutorial territories because Hong Kong island cannot write

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I live in Hong Kong, and I think people prefer riding bicycles when they go to school or to work, but this is less common for people who live in the New Territories because Hong Kong Island is very hilly.

Multiple issues: 'I'm living' is acceptable but simple present 'I live' is more natural for habitual fact. 'When they are going to school' should be 'when they go to school' (use simple present for habitual actions). 'Exceptional' is incorrect choice; use 'less common'. 'New tutorial territories' is wrong form and likely 'New Territories'; correct proper noun and preposition/collocation. The phrase 'cannot write' is nonsensical; likely intended reason 'is very hilly' or 'has steep roads'—use a clear explanation. Suggestions: use correct place name 'New Territories', use simple present for habits, choose appropriate prepositions and adjectives to express frequency and reason. Grammar problem type ID:11