Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and word choice (e.g. "back bike" → "bicycle"), and reduce redundancy. Use one or two linking words to show sequence (e.g. "at first", "then"). Keep to a maximum of about 3–4 concise sentences. Add a specific detail (where you learned or how long it took) to enrich the answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. At seven my grandfather bought me a pink bike, but at first I found it difficult because I had never ridden before. Then my brother taught me how to balance and pedal, and after a few weeks I could ride confidently around the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer ("No, I don't think so" or "Not very popular") and then give a clear reason with a specific example or contrast. Use correct article and quantifier usage ("most people", not "most of people"). Use a linking word like "because" or "however" to connect ideas. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: Not very popular. In my country most people own cars, so bicycles are mainly used for short trips by students or delivery workers. However, in some cities cycling is becoming more common because of new bike lanes and traffic congestion.

× Yes, I had a back bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence uses 'back bike', which is incorrect word choice rather than grammar; also the question asked about having a bike as a child so include timeframe for clarity. Use past tense 'had' (already correct) and replace 'back bike' with 'bike' and add 'when I was a child' to match the context.

× Actually I remember when I was at 7 years old my grandfather bought me a pink bike and to be honest it was hard to learn because I didn't have any idea how can I use it.

✓ Actually I remember that when I was seven years old my grandfather bought me a pink bike, and to be honest it was hard to learn because I had no idea how to use it.

Several issues: 'at 7 years old' is incorrect prepositional/number format and should be 'when I was seven years old'; include 'that' after 'remember' for clarity; 'didn't have any idea how can I use it' mixes past tense with question word order. Use past simple 'had no idea' and the correct infinitive order 'how to use it.'

× But after that my brother teach me.

✓ But after that my brother taught me.

The main verb should be in the past tense to match the time frame 'after that.' 'Teach' is present tense; the correct past simple form is 'taught.' Also add an object if needed (e.g., 'taught me how to ride'), but 'taught me' is acceptable.

× That's an interesting question to be honest.

✓ That's an interesting question, to be honest.

This sentence mainly needs punctuation for natural speech. The tense 'That's' (that is) is correct in present. No tense change required; adding a comma improves sentence flow. Classified as a present tense/context issue rather than a strict grammatical error.

× In my country bikes are not popular because most of people have their own car.

✓ In my country bikes are not popular because most people have their own cars.

'Most of people' is incorrect; use 'most people.' Also 'their own car' is singular and mismatches plural subject 'people'; use plural 'cars.' This is a subject-verb/number agreement and quantifier usage issue.