Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve accuracy, tense consistency, and expand slightly. Use past tense to talk about childhood and give a brief reason or context. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, and I usually walked to school or took public transport.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and vocabulary errors, avoid repetition, and organize ideas with linking words. State your opinion directly, then add specific supporting details (who uses them, why, and an example). Keep answers clear and under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and errands. For example, students and office workers prefer bikes since they are inexpensive, fuel-free, and easy to park in crowded cities.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past simple, so the answer should also be in past simple. Using 'don't have' is present tense and mismatches the time reference. Use 'didn't' (did not) to form the negative in past simple. Suggestion: answer past-time questions with past-tense verbs (e.g., 'No, I didn't.' or 'No, I didn't have one.').

× I don't know. For me, bites are very popular in my country because many people rely on them to get around, especially for short commutes and errands.

✓ I don't know. For me, bikes are very popular in my country because many people rely on them to get around, especially for short commutes and errands.

The student wrote 'bites' which is a misspelling of 'bikes' and changes meaning; this is a lexical/pronoun-like error affecting clarity. Replace 'bites' with 'bikes'. Also ensure consistency in tense and number: 'bikes' plural is correct for talking about the general popularity. Suggestion: check spelling and choose the correct noun form ('bike' vs 'bites').

× They are cheap, red and convenient and crowded cities, so students and workers often choose from choose them over course.

✓ They are cheap, reliable, and convenient in crowded cities, so students and workers often choose them.

The original lists adjectives incorrectly and contains extra words and repetition ('choose from choose them over course') and an illogical phrase 'and crowded cities'. The corrected sentence orders adjectives more logically and inserts 'in' to link 'convenient' with 'crowded cities'. Remove redundant words and repetition. Suggestion: place adjectives directly before the noun they modify or use a prepositional phrase to show context (e.g., 'convenient in crowded cities'), and avoid repeated verbs or incomplete phrases.