Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more coherent. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details. Use correct tense and avoid filler words. For example, say where you rode, who you rode with, and a specific memory or frequency. Keep it to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like “and” or “often”.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike around my neighborhood and to the local shopping mall with my friends. We usually went there on weekends to buy snacks and play, so riding was both practical and fun.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion then support it with specific reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” and avoid vague statements like “everyone.” Provide one or two concrete reasons why bikes are popular (cost, convenience, culture). Keep answers natural and limited to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular because they are cheap and convenient for short trips in cities. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or school and there are bike lanes in several towns that make riding safer.

× Yeah, I used to ride a bike where I was a tried oh I I went to go shopping mall with my friend

✓ Yeah, I used to ride a bike when I was a child. I also went to the shopping mall with my friend.

This sentence mixes ideas and contains fragments and nonstandard phrasing. It should be split into two clear sentences: one describing a past habitual action ('I used to ride a bike when I was a child') and one describing a specific past action ('I went to the shopping mall with my friend'). Remove filler words ('tried', 'oh', repeated 'I') and correct 'where I was a tried' to 'when I was a child'; change 'went to go shopping mall' to 'went to the shopping mall'. Use past simple for specific past events and 'used to' for past habits. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I do. I think everyone ride the bike, acquire the skills

✓ Yes, I do. I think everyone rides a bike and acquires the skills.

Subject-verb agreement requires third person singular verbs to take an -s in the present simple. 'Everyone' is singular, so use 'rides' and 'acquires'. Also use the article 'a' before 'bike' and join the coordinated verbs with 'and' to make a grammatically correct compound predicate. Use present simple to state general truths. Grammar problem type ID:6