Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Sử dụng thì và động từ đúng: sửa lỗi ngữ pháp về thì (quá khứ đơn), chia động từ và động từ bất quy tắc; cải thiện tính mạch lạc bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết; tránh câu lặp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (ví dụ: 'skilled' thay vì 'professional I wear'). Cụ thể: (1) mở đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp ở quá khứ; (2) dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., 'but', 'so', 'as a result'); (3) cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (khi bắt đầu, bao lâu bạn luyện tập, kết quả).

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child and I practised riding it almost every night. At first I found it very difficult, but after a few weeks of practice I became much more confident and skilled.

Sugestão: Cải thiện độ tự nhiên và chính xác: trả lời trực tiếp rồi thêm ví dụ cụ thể; tránh lặp từ và lựa chọn từ chính xác (ví dụ: 'traffic jams' thay vì 'traffic tram'); sử dụng liên từ để làm rõ nguyên nhân/hiệu quả. Cụ thể: (1) bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn; (2) cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào/ở đâu bạn thấy nhiều người đi xe đạp); (3) dùng từ vựng phù hợp và ngữ pháp đúng (plural/singular, present simple).

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. I often see many people cycling on the streets, especially during rush hour, and this sometimes causes traffic jams because so many commuters choose bicycles.

× Yes, I have a bag.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner's question asks about possession of a bike in childhood (past). The sentence uses present tense 'have' and mentions 'a bag', which does not answer the question. Use past tense 'had' and the correct noun 'bike' to match the context. Suggestion: Use past tense to describe past possession and respond directly to the item asked about: 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× When I were a child I practice every night to ride a bike.

✓ When I was a child I practiced every night to learn to ride a bike.

Subject-verb agreement: 'I' requires 'was' (not 'were') in past tense. The verb 'practice' should be past tense 'practiced' to match 'when I was a child'. Also 'to ride a bike' is better expressed as 'to learn to ride a bike' for clarity. Suggestion: Match past tense throughout time clauses and use appropriate verb forms: 'When I was a child, I practiced every night to learn to ride a bike.'

× At first I think it's really hard,

✓ At first I thought it was really hard,

The time frame is past, so present tense verbs 'think' and 'it's' are incorrect. Use past tense 'thought' and 'was' to describe initial impressions in the past. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent: 'At first I thought it was really hard.'

× but the more I practice the more professional I wear.

✓ but the more I practiced, the more skilled I became.

Multiple issues: 'practice' should be past tense 'practiced' to match past context. 'professional I wear' is ungrammatical — 'wear' is wrong verb and 'professional' is noun/adjective misused. Use 'skilled' or 'professional' as adjective and 'became' as the linking verb in past tense. Suggestion: Use correct verbs and adjectives to show improvement: 'but the more I practiced, the more skilled I became.'

× Bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is correct. Present simple is appropriate to state a general fact about popularity. Suggestion: No change needed.

× Most of the time I see a lot of people ride a bike on the street and sometimes there is a traffic tram because of people, because people ride a lot of bikes.

✓ Most of the time I see a lot of people riding bikes on the street, and sometimes there is traffic congestion because many people ride bikes.

Use of verb form: 'see a lot of people ride' is understandable but more natural is 'see a lot of people riding' (gerund after perception verbs). 'A bike' should be plural 'bikes' when referring to many people. 'Traffic tram' is incorrect; likely meant 'traffic jam' or 'traffic congestion'. Also repetition 'because of people, because people' is redundant. Use 'many people' to be concise. Suggestion: Use gerund after verbs like 'see' for ongoing actions, use plural nouns when referring to multiple items, and choose correct collocations: 'traffic congestion' or 'traffic jam'.