Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear, grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (past tense), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and vocabulary (e.g. "tricycle" not "trees"; "wheel" vs "wheelchair"). Avoid unnecessary words and keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. I had a tricycle when I was a child because I wasn’t confident riding a two-wheeler. My mother bought it for me, and I often rode it with my sister to visit friends in the neighbourhood.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use linking words to organise reasons, and make sentences grammatically correct. Give specific examples or a brief comparison. Use correct subject-verb agreement and articles. Keep it within five sentences.

Exemplo: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in Thailand because there are few dedicated bike lanes, so cyclists must share narrow roads with cars. As a result, many people prefer using cars or public transport for safety and convenience. The government could encourage cycling by building protected bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes.

× When I was so shy, I have a bicycle but it has three wheels because I'm not good at riding bicycle.

✓ When I was young, I had a bicycle, but it had three wheels because I wasn't good at riding a bicycle.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. The context 'When I was...' requires past tense verbs. Change 'have' to 'had' and 'has' to 'had'. Also use 'wasn't' for the negative past. Add the article 'a' before 'bicycle'. Use 'young' instead of 'so shy' which likely misexpresses age; if speaker meant 'shy' keep 'shy' but tense still must be past. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for events in childhood.

× So my mom buys me trees, wheelchair places, and I ride with my sister to go around with friends.

✓ So my mom bought me training wheels, and I rode with my sister to go around with friends.

The sentence should be in the past tense to match the childhood context. 'Buys' should be 'bought' (past of buy). The noun phrase 'trees, wheelchair places' is incorrect; likely intended 'training wheels'. 'I ride' should be 'I rode'. Use clear nouns: 'training wheels'. Keep verbs in past to match timeframe.

× No, I don't think so because in Thailand don't have the bicycle lane so they need to bike on the road which the road is so small So government didn't support Thai people to ride bicycles and people mostly use transportation of cars

✓ No, I don't think so because Thailand doesn't have bicycle lanes, so people need to ride on the road, which is often narrow. Also, the government doesn't support cycling much, and most people use cars for transportation.

Multiple errors: subject omission ('in Thailand don't have' lacks subject; use 'Thailand doesn't have'), subject-verb agreement ('lanes' and 'doesn't'), run-on sentences and punctuation issues. 'Bike on the road which the road is so small' is redundant and ungrammatical; rewrite as 'ride on the road, which is often narrow.' 'So government didn't support' mixes past and present; context about general situation uses present simple: 'the government doesn't support.' 'People mostly use transportation of cars' is awkward; use 'most people use cars for transportation.' Suggestions: include proper subjects, maintain present tense for general facts, fix agreement and sentence boundaries.