Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
hold just so gross how hot.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
I think so
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 10.0Sugestão: 回答が意味を成しておらず、質問に直接答えていません。まずは主題文で「はい/いいえ」や所有の有無を明確に述べ、その後で簡潔に補足(いつ、どんな自転車だったか、どれくらい使ったか)を加えてください。文は3文以内に収め、関連する語彙(bike, bicycle, ride, childhood, park, learned)を使いましょう。また発音と語順を意識して、短く自然な文を作る練習をして下さい。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it to the park near my house almost every afternoon.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答は簡潔ですが情報が不足しています。トピック文の後に理由や具体例を付け加えて、論理的に展開してください。接続語(because, so, for example, however)を使って説明をつなげ、具体的な状況(都市部での利用、通勤や運動、レンタサイクルの普及など)を挙げると説得力が増します。語彙ももう少し広げて表現の幅を見せましょう。
Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental services, so cycling is a convenient and affordable option for students and workers.
× hold just so gross how hot.
✓ I didn't understand; could you say that again?
The student's response 'hold just so gross how hot.' is ungrammatical and does not form a coherent sentence. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). It appears to be fragments of words placed in the wrong order with missing subject and verb. Suggestion: produce a complete sentence that answers the examiner's question. For example, to answer 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' a correct reply would be 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' Make sure to include a subject and a finite verb and keep the words in logical order: subject + verb + object/complement.'},{