Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Sure, it's very popular in our country. People tend to use it exercise.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 你在回答时没有直接回应问题,而是复述了考官的话。这样会被视为不自然且没有信息量。改进建议:直接给出一句主题句说明是否拥有自行车,接着用1–2句具体细节说明(比如何时得到、与谁一起骑、骑车的频率或特别记忆)。保证总句数不超过5句,并使用连接词使叙述连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was about six. My parents bought it for me for safety reasons, and I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答较为直接但存在语法与表达不够自然的问题(“use it exercise”不正确),且细节不足。改进建议:先给出明确观点,再用1–2句具体原因或例子支持(例如城市交通、健身或环保等),使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。注意语法准确性和词汇多样性。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people cycle to work or school, and cycling is also a common form of exercise on weekends.
× Sure, it's very popular in our country. People tend to use it exercise.
✓ Sure, they're very popular in our country. People tend to use them for exercise.
这句话有两个问题:1) 代词使用错误:上一句指代“bikes(复数)”,因此代词应为复数形式“they”而不是“it”;2) 介词和形式使用不当:短语“use it exercise”缺少介词且动词形式不正确,应使用“use them for exercise”或“use them to exercise”。建议把指代改为复数代词,并在“use”后加上介词“for”或改为不定式结构“to exercise”,使句子自然且符合语法。