Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and articles, avoid repetition (don’t use both “outstanding” and “great” together). Keep to a maximum of about 3–4 sentences. For example, start with a direct statement (Yes, I did) then give a specific detail (how it looked, how you felt) and a short reason or memory.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child my father bought me a bright red bicycle with a bell and training wheels, and I was thrilled. Because it was sturdy and light, I learned to ride quickly and used it to visit my friends every afternoon.

Sugestão: Use grammatically correct sentences, give a clear opinion as the topic sentence, and support it with specific reasons and a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'however'). Avoid vague phrases like ‘don't know with bikes.’ Instead explain prevalence and reasons (e.g., infrastructure, income, or climate). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars and scooters for convenience. Moreover, many cities lack safe bike lanes, so cycling is less common as a daily means of transport.

× I distinctly remember when I was child my father bought a bike for me.

✓ I distinctly remember when I was a child my father bought a bike for me.

Missing the article 'a' before 'child'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article or determiner. Add 'a' to make 'a child'. Also the rest of the sentence correctly uses past tense to describe a past event; no other tense changes are needed.

× It's outstanding and great bike.

✓ It's an outstanding and great bike.

The noun 'bike' is a singular countable noun and requires an article. Use 'an' before 'outstanding' because 'outstanding' begins with a vowel sound. Alternatively you could say 'It's an outstanding bike' or 'It's a great bike' to avoid redundancy.

× I enjoy when I ride it.

✓ I enjoy riding it.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form), not a clause with 'when' plus a simple verb. 'I enjoy riding it' is natural and grammatically correct. If you want to keep 'when', use present simple for habitual actions: 'I enjoy it when I ride it', but the gerund version is more concise.

× To be honest, my country don't know with bikes.

✓ To be honest, my country doesn't have a strong culture of biking.

'My country' is a third-person singular subject and requires 'doesn't' rather than 'don't'. The original phrase 'don't know with bikes' is ungrammatical and non-idiomatic. Replace with 'doesn't have a strong culture of biking' or 'is not familiar with bikes' to convey the intended meaning. If keeping closer: 'my country doesn't have many bikes' or 'bikes are not popular in my country'.

× It's known with cars and scooters.

✓ It is known for cars and scooters.

The verb 'known' typically collocates with the preposition 'for' when indicating what something is famous for. 'Known with' is incorrect. Also use 'It is' or 'My country is' to make the subject explicit: 'My country is known for cars and scooters.'