Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify tense and meaning, use a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and give a brief reason with linking words. Keep to 2–4 concise sentences. For example, say whether you had a bike, then explain why with a reason and one supporting detail.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I was afraid of cycling because I thought I might fall and get hurt, so my parents preferred I walk or use public transport. However, some of my friends learnt to ride and they encouraged me to try.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with correct grammar and use linking words to structure supporting points (e.g., 'because', 'however'). Use specific examples and avoid repetition. Limit to 2–4 sentences and choose accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'motorbikes' or 'cars', 'children' not 'childrens').

Exemplo: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in Azerbaijan. Most people prefer cars or motorbikes because they are faster and more comfortable for long distances. However, some children and teenagers do ride bicycles for fun or exercise in parks.

× I don't have a bike because I feel very exhausted.

✓ I didn't have a bike because I felt very exhausted.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense verbs. 'Don't have' and 'feel' are present tense; change to 'didn't have' and 'felt' to match past time reference.

× I afraid of a bike sometimes.

✓ I was afraid of bikes sometimes.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'was' for the adjective 'afraid' and the noun should match general reference: use plural 'bikes' or 'a bike'. Because the context is past, use 'was'. Also 'sometimes' fits better with plural 'bikes'.

× My friends say that you can do it, but I don't like this questions and.

✓ My friends said that I could do it, but I didn't like those questions.

Several issues: tense should be past to match context (change 'say' to 'said', 'can' to 'could', 'don't like' to 'didn't like'). 'This questions' is wrong: 'questions' plural needs 'these' or 'those'; 'and' at the end is incomplete and should be removed. Reword for clarity and grammatical agreement.

× I think uh, bikes are not popular in Azerbaijan.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in Azerbaijan.

This sentence is acceptable but has filler 'uh' which is unnecessary. No tense change required; keep present tense for general statement. Removed filler for clarity.

× Uh, every people used to umm, motor skill or cars.

✓ Most people used to use motorcycles or cars.

'Every people' is ungrammatical; use 'most people' or 'everyone'. 'Used to' needs a base verb after it: 'used to use motorcycles'. 'Motor skill' is incorrect; likely 'motorcycles'. Adjusted to past tense to match context.

× Uh, some, some children's or some teenagers used to umm, ride their bike.

✓ Some children and some teenagers used to ride their bikes.

'Children's' is possessive; use plural 'children'. 'Some, some' is redundant. 'Ride their bike' should agree in number: 'ride their bikes' or 'ride a bike'. Past tense 'used to ride' is correct.

× Uh, that's why I don't think it's not RP people.

✓ That's why I don't think it's popular among people.

This sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It contains a double negative ('don't think it's not') and 'RP people' is unclear. Preserving intended meaning ('not popular among people') requires rephrasing: use 'I don't think it's popular among people' or 'I think it's not popular among most people.'