Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법과 문장구조를 정확하게 고치고, 자연스럽게 연결어를 사용해 답변을 확장하세요. 예를 들어 시제와 어순 오류(‘memories are happy to me’ → ‘I have happy memories’)를 고치고, 이유나 감정 같은 구체적 세부사항을 추가하세요. 또한 문장을 3~4문장 내로 유지해 불필요한 중복을 피하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was twelve. I often rode it to the park with my father, so I have many happy memories of those afternoons. Because we spent time together there every weekend, I became more confident riding on busy paths.

Sugestão: 단어 선택과 문법을 명확히 하고, 공유 자전거 서비스에 대해 구체적인 정보와 이유를 제시하세요. 서비스 이름과 사용 빈도를 명확히 말하고, 연결어로 이유를 설명하면 더 설득력 있어집니다. 불확실한 표현(‘used bike called Dadangi’)을 고쳐 자연스럽게 말하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use a bike-sharing service called Dadangi. I often use it for short trips around the city, and it’s convenient and affordable, so more people choose bikes instead of cars.

× I often went to the park with my father so that memories are happy to me

✓ I often went to the park with my father, so I have happy memories.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect wording. 'So that' is used to express purpose and is inappropriate here; use 'so' to show result. 'Memories are happy to me' is ungrammatical English — 'have happy memories' or 'I have happy memories' is correct. Also add a comma before 'so' to join the clauses. Suggestion: use 'so' for result and rephrase the object of 'have' as 'memories'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, because a lot of people are used bike called Dadangi.

✓ Yes, because a lot of people use a bike service called Dadangi.

Multiple problems: 'are used bike' is incorrect—likely intended 'use' (verb) or 'are used to' (followed by -ing). Also missing article before 'bike' if singular; better phrasing is 'a bike service' or 'the bike-sharing service'. Changed 'are used bike' to 'use a bike service'. This fixes verb choice and article/phrase. Suggestion: use 'use' for habitual action and include correct article or noun phrase. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Dadangi is sharing service bike and I use often tarani

✓ Dadangi is a bike-sharing service, and I often use Tarani.

'Sharing service bike' has incorrect word order and missing articles; the correct compound noun is 'bike-sharing service'. 'I use often tarani' has wrong adverb placement; adverbs of frequency (often) should go before the main verb: 'I often use'. Also proper nouns like 'Tarani' should be capitalized. Suggestion: reorder words to form 'a bike-sharing service' and place 'often' before the verb. Grammar problem type ID: 13