Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement), clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words (e.g., "so", "because", "and"). Avoid redundant or incomplete phrases and keep the answer within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child, but I often used my brother’s bike. He taught me how to ride it, and I practiced every evening so I became confident. Because of his help, I enjoyed cycling with my friends.

Sugestão: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and organize ideas with linking words. Start with a clear opinion, then give specific supporting details or examples and a reason. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "popular", "use for commuting", "beneficial for health"). Keep it to 3–4 sentences and avoid repetitive phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Kazakhstan. Many people of all ages use bicycles for short trips or commuting because they are cheap and good for health. For example, in my city many people ride bikes to work or to the market during the warmer months.

× In my childhood, I don't had my own bike.

✓ In my childhood, I didn't have my own bike.

The sentence uses a present negative auxiliary 'don't' with the past tense verb 'had', causing a tense mismatch. Use the past simple negative form 'didn't' + base verb 'have' to form the correct past negative: 'didn't have'. Suggestion: Use 'didn't have' for past negative statements and keep the main verb in base form.

× I had the bike of my brother and always I was riding it the evening and my brother taught me how to write correctly and helped me when every time I get helped and now this is the only

✓ I used my brother's bike and I always rode it in the evenings. My brother taught me how to ride correctly and helped me whenever I needed help. Now it is the only one I have.

This sentence has several problems: use of 'the bike of my brother' is awkward—use the possessive 'my brother's bike' (article/possessive error). 'Always I was riding it the evening' has wrong word order and tense—use 'I always rode it in the evenings' for habitual past action (word order and past tense). 'Taught me how to write correctly' likely intended 'ride' not 'write'—word choice error. 'Helped me when every time I get helped' mixes tenses and incorrect structure; use 'helped me whenever I needed help' (past time reference). The sentence ends incomplete 'now this is the only'—complete as 'Now it is the only one I have.' Suggestion: Use possessive forms, put adverbs in natural positions (I always rode), use past simple for past habits, and complete sentences with clear objects.

× From my point of view, I think bikes is really vital in my country.

✓ From my point of view, I think bikes are really vital in my country.

The plural subject 'bikes' requires the plural verb 'are'. Using 'is' creates a subject-verb agreement error. Suggestion: Ensure verbs agree with their subjects in number: 'bikes are' for plural subjects.

× In Kazakhstan, a lot of people whenever that they are young or they are old, they are using the bike for day and it's really helpful for their health and it's the best thing that they can use for day.

✓ In Kazakhstan, many people, whether young or old, use bikes during the day. They are really helpful for their health and are one of the best ways to travel during the day.

Several issues: 'a lot of people whenever that they are young or they are old' is awkward—use 'many people, whether young or old' (conjunction/phrase correctness). 'They are using the bike for day' is incorrect preposition and article use; use 'use bikes during the day' (preposition/time expression). Repetition and awkward phrasing 'it's really helpful for their health and it's the best thing that they can use for day' should be split and clarified: 'They are really helpful for their health and are one of the best ways to travel during the day.' Suggestion: Use 'whether...or...' for alternatives, 'use' for general habits, 'during the day' for time expressions, and avoid repeating 'it' ambiguously; keep plural agreement with 'bikes'.