Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Well, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips and they are good exercise. For example, lots of people use bike sharing servers to go to work or school, so you can see many cyclists in the city.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 78.0Sugestão: 回答直接且自然,但过于简短,缺乏细节与连贯性。建议在主题句后补充1–2句具体细节(如什么时候得到、骑车的频率、与谁一起骑或印象深刻的记忆),并使用简单的连接词(例如: when, because, so)。这样可以展示流利度与丰富度,同时仍保持自然与简洁。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used to ride it almost every day after school with my friends. That experience helped me become more independent and fit.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 86.0Sugestão: 回答较完整,包含原因与例子,语言自然但有小错误和重复(如“bike sharing servers”应为“bike-sharing services”),部分连接词可更流畅。建议修正词汇错误,适当使用更多连接词(for example, moreover, therefore),并稍微具体化例子(如常见使用时间或地点)。仍保持不超过5句。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and ideal for short trips. For example, many people use bike-sharing services to commute to work or school during rush hour. Moreover, cycling is promoted as a healthy and eco-friendly option, so you often see dedicated bike lanes in cities.
× For example, lots of people use bike sharing servers to go to work or school, so you can see many cyclists in the city.
✓ For example, lots of people use bike-sharing services to go to work or school, so you can see many cyclists in the city.
句中“bike sharing servers”有两个问题:一是“bike sharing”在作复合名词时通常用连字符写为“bike-sharing”;二是“servers”拼写错误,正确名词为“services”(服务)。这属于词形和构词问题,虽然不完全在给定清单中,但最接近的是“Verb + -ing form”(8)因为短语构成中-ing形式的使用和拼写需要修正。建议:记住常见复合名词的书写(有时用连字符),并检查拼写(service 而非 server)。