Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, I think the bike is popular in our country because bikes is a common sport around my country. If you in the park or the garden you will see many people there ride the bike in a broad.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 你的回答没有直接回答考官的问题,而且句子是重复考官的话。需要直接给出主题句(是或不是),然后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意语法和单复数(bike/bikes),以及用适当的连词来衔接信息。例如说明什么时候拥有、如何使用、对你的影响等。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I rode it almost every day to visit my friends and explore the neighborhood. Riding helped me become more independent and confident because I could go places by myself.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 答题时要注意主谓一致和可数名词(bikes are, bikes are a common means of transport rather than "sport"除非你指的是自行车运动)。先给出直接观点,然后用一到两句具体例子支持,使用连接词(for example, because, so)使表达更连贯。注意词汇准确(broad → path/area; park or garden → parks or public squares)。
Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, you can often see people cycling in parks and on bike paths during weekends, and electric bikes are especially common in cities for commuting.
× Yes, I think the bike is popular in our country because bikes is a common sport around my country.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because biking is a common activity throughout my country.
错误类型:名词单复数和主谓一致。原句中先用单数定冠词短语“the bike is popular”但意思是泛指自行车,应用复数“bikes are”。接着“bikes is” 中主语为复数名词“bikes”,谓语却用单数“is”,应改为复数谓语“are”。另外“a common sport”不太恰当,骑自行车一般说作“biking is a common activity”(把名词化为动名词或用“activity”)。建议:泛指时用复数或不定冠词结构;主语为复数时动词用复数形式;描述活动时可用动名词或“activity”。
× If you in the park or the garden you will see many people there ride the bike in a broad.
✓ If you are in the park or the garden, you will see many people riding bikes on the road.
错误类型:介词及句子结构错误。原句缺少系动词“are”(You are in the park),短语“there ride the bike”语序和形式不正确,描述正在进行的动作应使用动名词或进行时“riding bikes”。“in a broad” 是错误用法,想表达在路上应该用“on the road”。建议:在描述位置时用正确的系动词(are);描述持续动作用动名词或进行时;表示在路上用介词短语“on the road”。