Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief info), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and articles, avoid repetition. For example, say when you got the bike, who gave it to you, and a specific memory of riding with friends.

Exemplo: Yes. My father bought me a new bike when I was seven, and I rode it every day with my friends after school. For example, we would race along the park path and explore nearby streets, which helped me feel independent and fit.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion followed by two specific reasons, using linking words for coherence. Fix grammar (use plural/singular, articles) and finish your thought. Include a short supporting example or comparison to strengthen your point.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people cycle to work in the morning and there are dedicated bike lanes in most cities. For instance, in my city the main avenue has a wide cycling path and bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling a convenient and common choice.

× If when I was a child my dad bought me a new new bike and then I ride my bike with my friends.

✓ When I was a child my dad bought me a new bike, and then I rode my bike with my friends.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect use of conditional 'If when' and tense inconsistency (mixing past simple 'bought' with present 'ride'). According to the allowed problem types, this is primarily a sentence structure error (ID 26) and also a past tense issue (ID 5). Fix by removing the unnecessary 'If', use 'When' to set past time, and make verbs consistent in the past simple: 'bought' and 'rode'. Also remove the duplicated word 'new'. Suggestion: Keep time frame consistent and use the same past tense for both actions.

× I like to ride bike for everyday so my bike is good for me.

✓ I liked riding my bike every day, so it was good for me.

The student is describing habitual actions in childhood, so past tense should be used rather than present. This is a present tense error (ID 6). Also 'ride bike' needs article 'my' and 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb phrase). 'My bike is good for me' refers to past context and should be 'it was good for me.' Suggestion: Use past continuous or simple past for habits in the past (e.g. 'I used to ride my bike every day' or 'I liked riding my bike every day').

× I think in our country bike is very popular because I see in the morning a lot of people are cycling and we have special route for ride bikes and I think it's.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in our country because I see many people cycling in the morning, and we have special routes for riding bikes.

This sentence contains several errors: singular/plural and subject-verb agreement ('bike is' should be 'bikes are'), incorrect word order, missing articles and plural forms ('route' -> 'routes'), and wrong verb form 'for ride' should be 'for riding'. These fit subject-verb agreement (ID 27), singular/plural issues (ID 1), incorrect use of prepositions/articles (IDs 11 and 22), and verb + -ing form (ID 8). The corrected version uses plural 'bikes are', moves 'in our country' to a natural place, uses 'many people' instead of 'a lot of people' for formality, and 'routes for riding bikes' for correct grammar. The trailing 'and I think it's.' was incomplete and removed; if the speaker intended to add something, finish the thought (e.g. 'and I think that's great').